Review Detail of 1AM in RevenGers

Read four chapters as of now. The setup, the opening high-stakes battle, and the dilemma of the lead, everything is neatly done and makes the reader intrigued throughout. My only gripe is the dialogues that are mildly artificial and expository, especially the dialogues spoken when the characters are on the verge of death. But other than that it is a fairly engaging story with a terrific start. Congrats! Will be visiting this often to see how the rest of the story is treated.