Reviews of Unpublished-ToaPP

The character and world building are pretty solid. I enjoyed reading through the chapters. What I find very interesting is that you have paced the story in such a way that it seems I myself am sailing on a boat, with no clear destination, all I know is that I love the sea. :)

This story is so wholesome! Not only is your writing superb, you also have a wonderful sense of humour! I loved it. Adding it to my library.

Defenetly an interesting story, both plot, and character-wise. From the few chapters that I have read I can say its a story worth giving a read to, and the writing itself is fantastic. best regards, author.

I will be honest and say I am personally not a fan of pirates, but I really enjoyed the way you structured your story and how you plotted it out. You managed to capture that world real well. Good job!

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It's great overall, The context is great as well as the content. Keep it up!

I like the way you describe an d writing style... polly is interesting.. hey author, one small suggestion, break your long paragraphs into small one it will help attract readers

Great start. Shame that she didn't manage or even try to recruit the Captain Trixx to be her crew. But an overall great start. My only concern was that the world background was not pretty vivid enough to imagine. And last, for the power-scale of this world. If you're into some adventures and wanted to start in some fresh new novel you can try this!

The story is one of a kind and it has its own charm that can lure readers who like this kind of book. The writing is of top quality and there are no issues when it comes to grammar. The plot has been well thought out and perfectly portrayed. Keep up the good work author. All the best.

its so good!!! like your plot and storyline and loved the way you wrote your book. However there were some misplaced full stops and commas and I suggest that you better correct them else your book was really good! keep writing!!!!! waiting for your next update!!

AH, it is beautiful. the writing is great your work is simply great. I'd probably recommend this book to anyone who's looking for this sort of setting to read. I adore Polly.[img=recommend] What I'd say is shorten the paragraph a bit and address them other than their names more. not he/she/them, those are fine but like the brunette said, the grey eyed man, etc.

Your story is really good and the pacing is going well too. A good pace almost makes for a good story telling. The problem I have is that some of your paragraphs are long that it gets overwhelming. Long dialogue is fine cause the person is talking other than that, please break up the paragraphs a little. Other than that, you are doing a good job and your story is very interesting (this is coming from someone who dislikes female lead). Keep up the good work!

This story is really good so far with an interesting world and characters. The writing is also some of the best that I've seen in terms of language usage and grammar. I hope the author succeeds.

The story and character building is amazing.. One of best I have read in here. Definitely a novel I would like to to follow.. Adding to my library ASAP 😁😁

Hello Author.. What I noticed in your novel at first is that you writing is excellent. The slang words and metaphors are a lil overwhelming.. maybe that's my problem,for, my English is sub par. As for the story, the plot is interesting and for someone who loves adventurous genre this will be very interesting... Keep up the good work author

This story is pretty interesting. I don't think I've read anything about a pirate in years, so reading this is like getting a nice cold glass of water on a sunny day. I honestly don't have much to say about grammatical errors, of course there are some-like every author has- but that's basically a needle in a haystack. You nice, keep going!