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Jacob_Grau

Jacob_Grau

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Hey people! My name is Jacob Grau. I'm currently a freshman in college. I've always had a burning deep inside my soul to tell these thoughts and stories in my head, so here they are! Enjoy!

2020-09-04 JoinedUnited States
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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Posted

    The character and world building are pretty solid. I enjoyed reading through the chapters. What I find very interesting is that you have paced the story in such a way that it seems I myself am sailing on a boat, with no clear destination, all I know is that I love the sea. :)

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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Commented

    Again. I think the names are awesome. Using saltine crackers as Polly's favorite food is funny and neat too!

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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Commented

    Super duper interesting concept. There arn't many pirate seafaring stories. I'm excited to see what's next!

    Ch 1 The Lamppost Auctioneers and the Dejected Pirate (1)
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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Commented

    I like the detail at her backstory. It's intriguing and is pushing me to keep reading.

    Years later, Polly moved to a new beach town and left the watchful eyes of her dear parents, despite still being a junior. After accustoming herself with nearly everything the sea had to offer including every variation of seafood possible, midnight swims, and rooming on cramped ships, Polly decided it was high time she got around to exploring the sea in her very own boat. And so, she studied and worked and ate minute meals up until she had save up the money she needed to consider herself a serious buyer, which was about now.
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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Replied to Shionokami

    Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! You have no idea how much it means to be receiving that compliment! Have a wonderful day!

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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Replied to SnowPenguin

    You are awesome! Thank you for the feedback and comment. I seriously appreciate it! Have a great day :)

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  • Jacob_Grau
    Jacob_Grau3yr
    Replied to spicyscribbles

    Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback. It helps me alot as I continue to develop the story and characters.

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