Review Detail of GraceCayford in Unpublished-ToaPP

AH, it is beautiful. the writing is great your work is simply great. I'd probably recommend this book to anyone who's looking for this sort of setting to read. I adore Polly.[img=recommend] What I'd say is shorten the paragraph a bit and address them other than their names more. not he/she/them, those are fine but like the brunette said, the grey eyed man, etc.