Review Detail of CarrotOnTheStick in Unpublished-ToaPP

Great start. Shame that she didn't manage or even try to recruit the Captain Trixx to be her crew. But an overall great start. My only concern was that the world background was not pretty vivid enough to imagine. And last, for the power-scale of this world. If you're into some adventures and wanted to start in some fresh new novel you can try this!