The writing itself is amazing, seriously unbelievable. I love the way you describe the world and the characters living in it. I can't really find anything wrong with your writing and book. Just keep on writing and doing a good job.

Perhaps I didn't clarify it all to well, but it would seem that Yuri's firepower isn't strong enough to deal it any damage.

Thank you, that means a lot. I worked very hard the last couple of years to get to this level. I hope you keep reading the story and enjoy the plot. There is more on the way.

I love romance stories, but I feel it's really hard to make them right and not turn them into a "Will they, won't they." type of story. While reading this book I can say it definitely isn't that. I love the main characters and their personalities. And most of all I love the direction the story is headed. I can't wait to read more.

Super dark, but a good read none the less. I really loved the beginning, and as someone who puts my characters through hardships at the beginning of the story I really hope our main lead gets here get to a happy point in life. All in all I enjoyed it and can't wait to read more.💪

A gripping and interesting plot, I have to admit. I really enjoyed the main characters and the world you've build. I hope you keep doing a good job and that the story continues.

An amazing hook of a first chapter. It really pulled you onto the story and didn't let go until you were caught up. I really enjoyed the story, but what I enjoyed even more were the characters. They have a distinct personality and air to them, something that compliments the story were well. Can't wait to read more.

It makes me happy to hear that, I'm trying to make the chapters as detailed and good as I can so it takes me a couple of days before releasing them. I do hope you stay to follow the story.

The characters are something else, my god. The character writing is impeccable. I just love the mc and not to forget the story, it's so emirsive. Seriously great job.

A really good and enjoyable read. I really like the story and even more the characters. I can't wait to read the rest and hope the updates are consistent because this is one hell of a story. Good work author👍

A good read, enjoyed it very much. Can't wait for more chapters to come out.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Story wise I like it a lot, characters are intriguing and likable. However, your pacing and writing could use a little work. Keep writing and working hard friend. You have a good story in front of you.

🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣oh, wow!Just... Wow...A very spicy story you have there sir.

A very gripping hook. From the first chapter, better said from the first couple of paragraphs I was hooked on the story, and not to mention the action. I don't know your background sir, but that's some very detailed and knowledgable information about combat, I'm very impressed. The story starts of very dark and throws you into this harsh unforgiving world, setting up what you can expect coming. From what I read up until now, this is a story you can't accuse of moving too fast or too slow, it's very nicely paced and well constructed. A lot of thought and energy went into it and I love seeing that.Can't wait to read the rest of it because sir, you have yourself a new fan.

🙇 thank you that means a lot.

Spy world combined with magic...https://giphy.com/gifs/yx400dIdkwWdsCgWYpI need more.What else is there to say except I need more author!

Damn do I love bezzare High-fantasy and this story scratches that ich. It's well crafter, well written and all in all interesting. Looking forward to more.

You have a good story here, with a lot of good themes and hopes. I'm intrigued by the plot and I have no doubts that if you continue writing you'll get that anime adaptation one day👍😁

I really enjoy the read. The characters are good and fun and most important, the mystery is interesting. I will definitely be waiting for more.