Reviews of Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

Just do a rewrite it's just sad to read I don't mean to be a ass hole but just do a re write it's just sad to read I mean why would want other people in your personal world and why is the mc being such a pussy . You wanted to make it realistic or something like that then it failed I am very sorry to say all this nasty stuff I know how hard it is to write a novel with out any help or payment so don't take to seriously ** thank you for writing this novel even if it's not that great 😇😇

I really hate it when people use the "english isn't my first language" excuse It's also not mine but I still don't make countless mistakes in one sentence. I learned english in school and trough reading novels etc. if you aren't confident in your english skills just don't write in english or learn it. It's not like you don't know any language besides english. But well I only wanted to rant and don't really care either way.

I wont say its one of best fanfics u can read but Instead i think that it could be considered among average fanfic that are fun to read(not talking about serious fanfics or extremely good) Writing Quality is good Chapters are updated daily or sometimes 2-3 chapters a day Story is development is good but somehow it makes reader feel that there could be more (i don't know what should be more but if what ever that feeling is corrected than i think it will be an extremly good fanfic) Character Designs are good. each character is clearly explained though there is a bit problem with mc girls as author although tries to explain their character, are too easily attached to mc that it makes reader feel that mc is just catching them all World background is good. Even while using original background completely author didn't mess up unlike other author's who just to add something by themselves to world backgrounds mess it up.

Please, if you are going to create a character focus on his personality, you are almost always wrong, sometimes he seems like a child and others a teenager, you changed the height an infinite number of times, sometimes he measures 160 cm and other times less than that, and his Character changes, it is like a bipolar, it defines its character well, if it is a fag or princess or brave, apart, it is not necessary to describe the characters in a fanfic, just in case it is original it is necessary.

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Some of the chapters are a copies of endless path: infinite cosmos, especially the traumatized part...... My advice is to improve your writing, imagination, and grammar to become a best fanfic author

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Meh. .... Remember how Fucking retard beta MC take a whole Village into his soul world is really your Worse decision.... Meh... You know that utaha is in MC soul world...... And this retard MC i dont know where he is get his Fucking hero syndrome...... And i am Just imagine how utaha get gangbanged by bunch of these Villager while MC is trying hard to get stronger and playing his hero syndrome and talking with utaha while utaha hold her moan from taking double or triple penetration so MC doesn't know that she is being ****ed gangbanged while talking with MC..... Hahahahahahahahahahahaha.... Fucking retard beta naive author.....

To be honest it's a crappy story that needs rewriting it's unlikable borderline unbearable to read, Hope to see it redone more carefully in the future if possible.

Wrote this for the nonexistent improvement despite the critics of so many comrades.. **********############********** **********##########*********** **********########************

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Autor are You seriosly this MC IS good IS a fk..g pussy, coward,childist, to emotional, patetec, etc ...... This IS the 2nd worst MC I read in a fanfic ever, apar from him the novel maybe Will It have a better future but You just runed It,😩

You chose two of the most cringe and new weebo anime to fanfic about. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks. No thanks.

I dont really have wirds but all i will say is this fanfic is not very good the characters are not very well made the development is horrible and the harem thing goes way to easily all around not a good read for someone Who has read a lot of fanfics

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Its just plain awful, I couldn't get pass chapter 18. You made the MC have a hero syndrome, that he will help every person he meet, that's a big no already in My books. Not only that but he asked to share his system, its like when you give your wife to somebody when they are feeling lustful. Overall I couldn't read the rest of it.

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