Review Detail of Just_ForFun in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

Just do a rewrite it's just sad to read I don't mean to be a ass hole but just do a re write it's just sad to read I mean why would want other people in your personal world and why is the mc being such a pussy . You wanted to make it realistic or something like that then it failed I am very sorry to say all this nasty stuff I know how hard it is to write a novel with out any help or payment so don't take to seriously ** thank you for writing this novel even if it's not that great 😇😇