Review Detail of LeviathanJr in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

Please, if you are going to create a character focus on his personality, you are almost always wrong, sometimes he seems like a child and others a teenager, you changed the height an infinite number of times, sometimes he measures 160 cm and other times less than that, and his Character changes, it is like a bipolar, it defines its character well, if it is a fag or princess or brave, apart, it is not necessary to describe the characters in a fanfic, just in case it is original it is necessary.