did I miss something? They are still in a game no? I mean sure they are trapped in the game and they'll die for real if they die but it's still a game and the mobs and npcs are still bundles of code.

Small advise. you don't get more readers by being annoying. The only thing this wall of text does is make me eye-roll and speedscroll past it. I've never felt less tempted to read something or donate money. And it also kills my desire to continue reading. Maybe try looking at it from the viewers perspective.

The story is well written but we're now at chapter 91 and the MC is still 14 years old and still figuring out his powers (not because he's just getting more and more powers) we've until now only had 1 mention of the name Blacksteel and that was only a vision from the future so I highly doubt that it will ever get to this point. Until now the mc didn't have any real reason to use his powers except for maybe 2 scenes. I also didn't see even one scene where I had the feeling, that the mc had an average intelligence not to mention above average. also the sex scenes are terrible I recommend skipping them(did I mention 14 yo?). It would probably be a 2 Star if it weren't for the update stability and the good writing quality

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If you think that's how a person with a good heart acts I recommend therapy. Anyway that chapter really destroyed the story

Another problem would be that you don't have any copyright of this story whether you wrote it or not since this is a fanfic the copyright is with the copyright owners of cyberpunk 2077. So I doubt that webnovel will care since it's still a story uploaded here which means traffic for this website

Chapters keep getting shorter and shorter but atleast there are enough chapters for patreon. who writes fanfics to make money you literally could've written an original novel about a Zombie apocalypse and maybe even made money with it. well you'd have to write a lot more then you are now. well I'm not going to continue waiting a week for 5 sentences and I'm definitely not paying for a fanfic

アイデンティティ · Mikio Sakai

I see but don't most people look for the newest updated stories anyway? that's what I do anyway

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I hope you know that what you're doing is not allowed. You don't have copyright for fanfiction even if you wrote it yourself. Well I doubt anyone will care but who knows

Why read a Fanfic about TDG if you don't even like the original? too much time?

isn't he supposed to be a vampire? or does that come later because right now he is even weaker than a normal human not to mention that he doesn't seem to like blood

Doesn't it get boring tho? even I find them extremely predictable and I didn't even read that many and finished none of them

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