there is even a Review with the content " Nice"....you didn't see wrong, that's the whole review......so don't tell me that I am lazy

Oh, chill dude, what got you so worked up? I still gave you a 3.5 Stars Review, which is good in my opinion, but whatever... I also said that opinions differ and that some maybe like it but I am not one of those, so chill and accept that I am not that into your Story, okay? Also, yeah, it's a lazy review but I doubt you get so worked up if someone just gives u a review like that: " I love it, keep up the good work. Finally, someone who can write a good One Piece Fanfic" 99% of the reviews aren't good reviews and just one or two sentences. Also, as I stated, people already told you why they don't like your Story or what you did wrong, so why should I repeat it?

So all I could get from this Review and the comments blow, that this Story is really badly done and isn't worth reading ;D. thx for warning me even though you didn't intend to

Well, I am honestly too lazy to say what is good and whatnot. The problems I have with the Story were already mentioned by others, so I won't be able to help the author with that aspect. A Meh Meh Story in my opinion, but opinions differ, so there's that. I had a bit more expectations when I first saw that Story, so I got a little disappointed when I read it....;( I read the first 6 Chapters because I thought it was good to know the character's personalities even though I know nearly everything there is to know about Vlad the Impaler and his Story. But when it got past that and into the World of One Piece, pure disappointment so far. The Chapters are longer then most on this Platform, so I have to spent some time to read them, but it is not worth it in my opinion because I lost the interest in the Novel really fast. (An: I don't prove read what I write and English isn't my mother language, so expect missing words or grammatically wrong sentences, or smth likes this)

thanks for the Chapter, your majesty.

Imao, he was born in the ancient Times!

5% Of instant Mastery should still be instand Mastery, or not ? Its like you want take 50% from some unlimited and infinite source, it will still be infinite!

is this a Sixnine innuendo?

try to reduce your " I thougth " placements

you need an Editor

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sorry for my grammar ;D. I mostly don't proofread my sentences so you'll see a lot of missing words ;)

Well, I don't know, for real! I just think that Mc's actions are good because be wouldn't be able to match Akainu at the moment, so that's a plus, but I don't why there is this 0% chance of winning for example....this makes no sense 0% is smth that has to be considered before writing. There are endless possibilities/futures of him winning or losing. Small factors can decide a fight. Also, he is really powerful and not a weak ant and compared to the big powerhouses of the World....and his winning should at least be at 10% or more, in my opinion. And I commented on this guy's comment because it makes no sense in my opinion. He said:" would run away as soon as I see him" or smth like this, and yes, he should because he is a normal human and not the Mc which makes the comment meaningless

Just thought I was Eminem for a moment...

shitty....wait, what happend. 🥴🥴

and why ? As far as I know kingdoms do not have enough Power to handle someone on the power-level of our Mc. Our Mc can destroy Kingdoms as well. Admirals just have more control over their DF because they had much more time Training with them.Also, their skills and bodies are slighty besser then the Mcs but the gap isn't that huge

? yeah because you and I are normal Humans compared to an Anime word where ppl can destroy kingdom, Islands etc with just their punshes or literally destroy the World in a way, idiot

even if he doesn't have a plan, it was fun to read

I am reading it 🥳🥳🥳🥳🙃🙃😆🙂😅😂😊🙂😊😂