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Jasonenrick

Jasonenrick

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Did you hear about the kidnapping at school? #HolyJokerSquat #CornbringerSquat He had a good Dream ;) It was me, and I had a Dream about you liking my profile for no reason at all!

2019-04-30 JoinedGermany
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1h
    Replied to Morpheus146

    there is even a Review with the content " Nice"....you didn't see wrong, that's the whole review......so don't tell me that I am lazy

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1h
    Replied to Morpheus146

    Oh, chill dude, what got you so worked up? I still gave you a 3.5 Stars Review, which is good in my opinion, but whatever... I also said that opinions differ and that some maybe like it but I am not one of those, so chill and accept that I am not that into your Story, okay? Also, yeah, it's a lazy review but I doubt you get so worked up if someone just gives u a review like that: " I love it, keep up the good work. Finally, someone who can write a good One Piece Fanfic" 99% of the reviews aren't good reviews and just one or two sentences. Also, as I stated, people already told you why they don't like your Story or what you did wrong, so why should I repeat it?

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1h
    Replied to Weirdo

    So all I could get from this Review and the comments blow, that this Story is really badly done and isn't worth reading ;D. thx for warning me even though you didn't intend to

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2h
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    Well, I am honestly too lazy to say what is good and whatnot. The problems I have with the Story were already mentioned by others, so I won't be able to help the author with that aspect. A Meh Meh Story in my opinion, but opinions differ, so there's that. I had a bit more expectations when I first saw that Story, so I got a little disappointed when I read it....;( I read the first 6 Chapters because I thought it was good to know the character's personalities even though I know nearly everything there is to know about Vlad the Impaler and his Story. But when it got past that and into the World of One Piece, pure disappointment so far. The Chapters are longer then most on this Platform, so I have to spent some time to read them, but it is not worth it in my opinion because I lost the interest in the Novel really fast. (An: I don't prove read what I write and English isn't my mother language, so expect missing words or grammatically wrong sentences, or smth likes this)

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick5h
    Commented

    thanks for the Chapter, your majesty.

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick15h
    Commented

    Imao, he was born in the ancient Times!

    " Cadis Etrama Di Raizel was born in more or less in the medieval times. So gather books or anything that's valuable for future use. " The God of Void said. " It was nice meeting you. " I said. " It was nice meeting you too. " The God of Void said.
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick16h
    Commented

    5% Of instant Mastery should still be instand Mastery, or not ? Its like you want take 50% from some unlimited and infinite source, it will still be infinite!

    " So you can do anything you want with your 1st and 2nd wish before the start of the story of the world you reside in. But after the start of the story you will only have access to 5% of your 1st and 2nd wish." The God of Void said.
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick16h
    Commented

    is this a Sixnine innuendo?

    " Why the hell would I care about that." I shouted. " Are you deaf? Are you stupid? or are you stupid? Did you live long enough to destroy your own sanity." I said.
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick16h
    Commented

    try to reduce your " I thougth " placements

    Ch 1 Prologue, Death , Reincarnation, A new beginning
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick19h
    Commented

    you need an Editor

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick19h
    Commented

    *from

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
    Replied to OtakuReverence

    sorry for my grammar ;D. I mostly don't proofread my sentences so you'll see a lot of missing words ;)

    [I'm getting a few comments asking why MC is avoiding fighting Akainu... I mean, give me a good reason why he should NOT avoid him right now...]
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
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    Well, I don't know, for real! I just think that Mc's actions are good because be wouldn't be able to match Akainu at the moment, so that's a plus, but I don't why there is this 0% chance of winning for example....this makes no sense 0% is smth that has to be considered before writing. There are endless possibilities/futures of him winning or losing. Small factors can decide a fight. Also, he is really powerful and not a weak ant and compared to the big powerhouses of the World....and his winning should at least be at 10% or more, in my opinion. And I commented on this guy's comment because it makes no sense in my opinion. He said:" would run away as soon as I see him" or smth like this, and yes, he should because he is a normal human and not the Mc which makes the comment meaningless

    [I'm getting a few comments asking why MC is avoiding fighting Akainu... I mean, give me a good reason why he should NOT avoid him right now...]
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
    Replied to amaturewriter

    Just thought I was Eminem for a moment...

    Ch 16 Taking Down a Symbol of Justice (2)
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
    Replied to amaturewriter

    shitty....wait, what happend. 🥴🥴

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
    Replied to Ki_Sa

    and why ? As far as I know kingdoms do not have enough Power to handle someone on the power-level of our Mc. Our Mc can destroy Kingdoms as well. Admirals just have more control over their DF because they had much more time Training with them.Also, their skills and bodies are slighty besser then the Mcs but the gap isn't that huge

    [I'm getting a few comments asking why MC is avoiding fighting Akainu... I mean, give me a good reason why he should NOT avoid him right now...]
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
    Replied to kk_gamer

    ? yeah because you and I are normal Humans compared to an Anime word where ppl can destroy kingdom, Islands etc with just their punshes or literally destroy the World in a way, idiot

    [I'm getting a few comments asking why MC is avoiding fighting Akainu... I mean, give me a good reason why he should NOT avoid him right now...]
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1d
    Commented

    even if he doesn't have a plan, it was fun to read

    [In case there are people wondering why he's acting this way, worry not, it's all a part of his plan]
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2d
    Commented

    I am reading it 🥳🥳🥳🥳🙃🙃😆🙂😅😂😊🙂😊😂

    [Author's Note: My new fanfic is out! Earth vs The Gamer has started!]
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