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Oussama_Jaafar

Oussama_Jaafar

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Your run in a mill guy who loves reading.

2019-10-06 JoinedMorocco
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar1mth
    Commented

    I would suggest Ko-fi.

    Ch 153 A/N: Request
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    Multiverse's Ghost Rider
    Movies ¡ TheMightyZeus
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar1mth
    Commented

    Dude you were going so good till you added lookism, just stick to Baki and Kengan and drop lookism. it's getting tedious.

    Ch 189 Chapter 181
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    Path to Strength
    Anime & Comics ¡ TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar2mth
    Commented

    What's the point of giving him a powerful cheat if it's not gonna make him at least somewhat special?

    Ch 95 NGJ Chapter 95: Atelophobia
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    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics ¡ Bronz_Deck
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar2mth
    Commented

    This is not for me, too spineless. bye.

    Ch 10 Arriving at New York Sanctum
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    In Marvel with Greatest System
    Movies ¡ Boring_World
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar4mth
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    The house doesn't fit his personality.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
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    HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]
    Book&Literature ¡ BoOk_LoV3r_429
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar4mth
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    You did well making the MC sentimental instead of the cold and opportunistic MCs that are more common. I would suggest to tone down the sentimentality a bit though, it kinda makes him look a bit whiny but that's just my opinion...

    Ch 54 It's not a chapter, but rather a note! (Regarding the story - I'M NOT DROPPING IT!)
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    Streamer in the Omniverse
    Anime & Comics ¡ Calleum_Artori
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar4mth
    Commented

    Definitely Black Clover, i feel like there are no good ones out there.

    Ch 167 Update
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    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Anime & Comics ¡ Jovami6729
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar5mth
    Commented

    He's not gonna be 100% goody two shoes right?

    Ch 5 Becoming The Monster of Mobile
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    Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode
    Anime & Comics ¡ EzioAuditore_1
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar5mth
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    Anything but another reincarnator dude😑

    [You see, I realized that the world that Jin visits would be a breeze for him as his strength is already OP. So, I decided to add a challenge and a spice in his next world which is the Hotel Transylvania world. I decided to add an oc reincarnator that would obviously be his enemy.]
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    Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer
    Movies ¡ SlimeSage
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7mth
    Commented

    Yes, walk right into a telepath den why don't ya...

    Ch 6 Meeting The Team
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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    TV ¡ Saintbarbido
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7mth
    Commented

    The dialogue is too green...

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 "Two People From Two Different Schools"
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    Spotted By Grindelwald And Went To Hogwarts
    Anime & Comics ¡ Poka_Poka
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7mth
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    If you had put your MC in the timeline before Mikoto and Kushina got married maybe you would have more leeway in getting them but now it's impossible to do so without ruining your story for good.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: thoughts of bringing the dead back to life
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    Naruto World with a Simulation System
    Anime & Comics ¡ souryourer
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7mth
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    The romance part was ehh but everything else was spot on my friend.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Hogwarts
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    HP: The Gray Sorcerer
    Anime & Comics ¡ Abyssuit
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar7mth
    Commented

    Seems a bit forced there.

    Ch 62 Ch. 62
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    multiverse: gamer system
    Anime & Comics ¡ ShadowPanda_538
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar9mth
    Commented

    Let's be real here, not all chinese fanfiction are bad, it's the poor translation and some frivolous new chinese authors that only write whatever they want with no regards to the other aspects that make a good story.

    And before reading this book, you should put aside your bias against Chinese novels. Although it's not a Chinese novel, the plot I used will probably make you feel like it's a Chinese novel.
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    My Inner Voice Heard By Heroines
    Anime & Comics ¡ DogLickerGods
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar10mth
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    Balance.

    As I walked, I pondered the spell I needed to siphon the Dimensional Gap. Absorb, flow, control, seize, contain, secure, protect, space, time, open, close, durable, connection, repair, force, stop, and start - I had all the necessary concepts, but the resulting magic circle would be enormous.
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    Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)
    Anime & Comics ¡ Taidanotsumi
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar10mth
    Commented

    I feel like he's just randomly adding girls to the mix...

    The new character to invoke is "Esdeath".
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    doulou dalu:ten thousand worlds anime system
    Book&Literature ¡ Pepetimbo_32412323
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar10mth
    Commented

    I actually would have preferred it like this to be honest, the onee san stereotype is kinda overused...

    *Memory has been sorted. It is requested to the Host give the Ultimate Skill Raphael a name and choose a persona for it. *
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    Transmigrated With Raphael who now acts like an Onee San
    Anime & Comics ¡ Kaoski
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar10mth
    Commented

    ready player one is better I think🤔

    Because just now, a fantastic idea popped into his mind. When it comes to "Sword Art Online," anyone even remotely familiar with the world of anime and manga would also associate it with another work by the author, Reki Kawahara, called "Accel World."
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    Marvel: Little Genius
    Movies ¡ Lightreaper
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  • Oussama_Jaafar
    Oussama_Jaafar10mth
    Commented

    WWHHYYYYY!!!

    its large white belly using its internal projection device and compared it with its own database, as well as analyzed it using its microcomputer. "Master, according to my diagnosis, you are in a severely sub-healthy state with mild shoulder and neck issues. Additionally, based on traditional Chinese medicine theory, your symptoms are consistent with kidney deficiency. I suggest you engage in appropriate physical exercise and complement it with wolfberry tea for treatment."
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    Marvel: Little Genius
    Movies ¡ Lightreaper
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