Its just plain awful, I couldn't get pass chapter 18. You made the MC have a hero syndrome, that he will help every person he meet, that's a big no already in My books. Not only that but he asked to share his system, its like when you give your wife to somebody when they are feeling lustful. Overall I couldn't read the rest of it.
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