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Dragonia_101
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I wont say its one of best fanfics u can read but Instead i think that it could be considered among average fanfic that are fun to read(not talking about serious fanfics or extremely good) Writing Quality is good Chapters are updated daily or sometimes 2-3 chapters a day Story is development is good but somehow it makes reader feel that there could be more (i don't know what should be more but if what ever that feeling is corrected than i think it will be an extremly good fanfic) Character Designs are good. each character is clearly explained though there is a bit problem with mc girls as author although tries to explain their character, are too easily attached to mc that it makes reader feel that mc is just catching them all World background is good. Even while using original background completely author didn't mess up unlike other author's who just to add something by themselves to world backgrounds mess it up.

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Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

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Dragonia_101
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I recommend author should focus more on the story and character development (the plot idea is good but something is lacking in execution or character design that messes it up )