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Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]

Author: Try_hard
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WARNING: UNREALISTIC ROMANCES HAREM AND GORE. ALSO, EXPECT SLOW-ISH PACE NOTE: This fanfic will have a slightly slow pace in order to have some character interaction. Please don't expect instant Godlike Mc. he may be OP but wont be flawless After getting a new phone, Ryuu Cinco finds himself tangled in multiverse madness and becoming a new entertain for the watchers(Readers). [A New member had joined!] [Welcome Exbitionist] [A New member had joined!] [Welcome Flame Emperor] [A New member had joined!] [Welcome Butterfly Hashira] [A New member had joined!] [Welcome Titania] [A New member had joined!] [Welcome Self Proclaimed Human]

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Table of Contents
Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :journey to Omni-Dimensional

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I honestly don't know how to describe this.. The story progression is extremely slow and longwinded.. Like for example, MC goes on his first mission, at chapter 28.. The comedy is practically non-existent and dry to the point that you'd find more moisture on the crusty feet of your 95 year old grandmother.. The story is extremely dull and there's no progression, quite literally.. Like one moment MC is just a normal guy, then suddenly decides to becomes a cannibal that drinks blood willingly without batting an eye, and even takes great pleasure from it.. it is just disgusting and weird.. Like what sane person would do that, MC was normal???? idk what author is doing with this story tbh, I feel like, he wants the MC personality to be "cool" "baddass" or "mysterious" ..... unless, your a immature little brat, that thinks frowning or doing the duckface when you're getting your picture taken is cool, it is none of those.. I can only describe MC as; "Ughh".. yes, that's how I describe it folks.. ^^ MC is not interesting, and that is basically a fanfic killer, because, If your MC isn't good or interesting then, why would anyone read this? There's no planning or structure to the story, it is too serious, a smidge of darkness and basically boring.. and this story wasn't meant to be those things, It is about traveling the omni-verse where characters of fiction come alive! It is about MC having fun in basically infinite worlds.. It is none of that and a disappointment.. so yeah.. this is my review.. If you found it helpful you're welcome for the time saved.. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability of Updates - 3/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 2/5 Overall/total - 1.8 / 5

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