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Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv12yr
2022-02-25 07:36

Yah untuk saat ini saya akan kasih bintang 5 untuk novel ini. Saya cuma berharap author tidak terlalu memaksakan sekali Harem yang mengumpulkan para wanita seperti mengumpulkan pokemon. Jujur jangan sampai jadinya ceritanya ini persis seperti novel sebelah,jadi ngeri saya membaca halusinasi si pengarang melebihi ekspektasi si pembaca 😂

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Riku_Wing
Riku_WingLv10

Novel sebelah itu maksudnya akikan40 itu. Sejak awal memang sampah, kata-katanya terus berulang dan gak berkembang sama sekali.

Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1

Iyah😂

Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1

Yah yah itu pokoknya 😂 Kesel gua bacanya Halusinasinya bikin ngeri😂 Wkwkwkw

Riku_Wing:Novel sebelah itu maksudnya akikan40 itu. Sejak awal memang sampah, kata-katanya terus berulang dan gak berkembang sama sekali.
Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

Bro setidaknya hormatilah sesama orang Indonesia

Riku_Wing:Novel sebelah itu maksudnya akikan40 itu. Sejak awal memang sampah, kata-katanya terus berulang dan gak berkembang sama sekali.
Riku_Wing
Riku_WingLv10

Bacot lu! Gua udah capek-capek baca dari awal sampai chapter terbaru, ternyata hasil sampah. Isinya cuma harem—isi percakapan dan lelucon tidak menarik sama sekali, selain itu tokoh utama hanya mengejar wanita lain tanpa memikirkan perasaan pacar sendiri.

Fuehrer:Bro setidaknya hormatilah sesama orang Indonesia
Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

eh si anying ngegas

Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

you to. gw gak suruh makan tai juga bro, gw juga agak kesel sih bacanya tapi gk ada fanfic mau dibaca lagi. fanfic akikan setiap hari update makanya gw baca

Riku_Wing:Bacot lu! Gua udah capek-capek baca dari awal sampai chapter terbaru, ternyata hasil sampah. Isinya cuma harem—isi percakapan dan lelucon tidak menarik sama sekali, selain itu tokoh utama hanya mengejar wanita lain tanpa memikirkan perasaan pacar sendiri.
Riku_Wing
Riku_WingLv10

Coba lu baca novel; Anime Multiverse Dimensional Chat Group.

Fuehrer:you to. gw gak suruh makan tai juga bro, gw juga agak kesel sih bacanya tapi gk ada fanfic mau dibaca lagi. fanfic akikan setiap hari update makanya gw baca
Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

lagi nabung. juga agak jarang updatenya

Riku_Wing:Coba lu baca novel; Anime Multiverse Dimensional Chat Group.
Riku_Wing
Riku_WingLv10

Maksudnya apa, ya?

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8ightbit
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I honestly don't know how to describe this.. The story progression is extremely slow and longwinded.. Like for example, MC goes on his first mission, at chapter 28.. The comedy is practically non-existent and dry to the point that you'd find more moisture on the crusty feet of your 95 year old grandmother.. The story is extremely dull and there's no progression, quite literally.. Like one moment MC is just a normal guy, then suddenly decides to becomes a cannibal that drinks blood willingly without batting an eye, and even takes great pleasure from it.. it is just disgusting and weird.. Like what sane person would do that, MC was normal???? idk what author is doing with this story tbh, I feel like, he wants the MC personality to be "cool" "baddass" or "mysterious" ..... unless, your a immature little brat, that thinks frowning or doing the duckface when you're getting your picture taken is cool, it is none of those.. I can only describe MC as; "Ughh".. yes, that's how I describe it folks.. ^^ MC is not interesting, and that is basically a fanfic killer, because, If your MC isn't good or interesting then, why would anyone read this? There's no planning or structure to the story, it is too serious, a smidge of darkness and basically boring.. and this story wasn't meant to be those things, It is about traveling the omni-verse where characters of fiction come alive! It is about MC having fun in basically infinite worlds.. It is none of that and a disappointment.. so yeah.. this is my review.. If you found it helpful you're welcome for the time saved.. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability of Updates - 3/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 2/5 Overall/total - 1.8 / 5

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