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Probably the best Coiling Dragon fanfiction on this site, by far.

I like the story.

I don’t understand why this story is rated so poorly, when it’s clearly one of the best Fairy Tail fanfictions on this site. The only frustrating part is that, at chapter 90, the author still hasn’t made a clear decision about the harem aspect. Personally, I’m fine with either direction, but dragging this uncertainty out for so long becomes annoying.

The protagonist conceals his strength, lies almost constantly, and always plays the role of the naive, the stupid, and the submissive. He's even quite bad at it, since almost every character with even a modicum of intelligence has figured out he's lying. In fact, he lies so badly that a five-year-old could do a better job. Honestly, I don't see the point of writing fanfiction about a man subservient to Maki, who wants to remain unnoticed but is so stupid that everyone distrusts him. Even the romance with Maki makes no sense…

Out of all the names that exist, he chooses the name of an already existing character; it's so stupid, wow!

The Dark-Dark Fruit is completely useless in a world without Devil Fruits, since its primary purpose is to nullify the powers of other fruits. Furthermore, the Dark-Dark Fruit is not a typical Logia; unlike other Logias, it does not grant physical invulnerability. This information is readily available on the One Piece wiki.

The Dark-Dark Fruit is completely useless in a world without Devil Fruits, since its primary purpose is to nullify the powers of other fruits. Furthermore, the Dark-Dark Fruit is not a typical Logia; unlike other Logias, it does not grant physical invulnerability. This information is readily available on the One Piece wiki.

Yet another fanfiction where AI is used excessively to the point of becoming unreadable. The interactions between the characters are completely artificial, the dialogues are horrible to read, and anyone who has ever used AI recognizes its influence in this work. Nevertheless, the basic idea was interesting, and the author did a good job in the early chapters, even though he only provided the outline and the vast majority of the rest was the work of AI. Everything started to fall apart when the protagonist began to become attached to and interact with a character who tried to kill him for no other reason than "for fun." I don't know what the author really intends to do with this relationship, but it's absolutely disgusting. Worse still, the protagonist wallows in mediocrity and submissiveness, behaving like a docile animal, a mere pet for all the other characters. I can understand a protagonist bowing their head when in a position of weakness, but such total submission is simply repugnant. The protagonist is without honor or dignity, despised by all, treated like an object that can be eliminated at any moment, but he feels not the slightest ounce of hatred towards those who tried to kill him, including the young girl with whom he eventually becomes close. In short, if you enjoy fanfiction largely written with the help of AI, featuring a weak and submissive protagonist who hides their strength in a ridiculous and forced way, to the point that it causes them more problems than it solves, then this story is for you.

Excellent translation. Excellent fanfic. Nothing more to say, I just want more chapters.

Quality writing, ruined by a terribly boring protagonist. The kind of character with no ambition, no emotions, who doesn't care about anything and doesn't want to get involved in anything. Seriously, what's the point of writing about this kind of character? It's completely pointless.