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Authority_Lv33yr
2022-03-01 04:02

Drop in chapter 28, The MC is an insufferable hypocrite, but what made me drop was the nerf to the system when he goes on a mission to another world. The nerf is unacceptable, it reduces the whole story to a ridiculous joke.

Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]

Try_hard
4.4
185 Chs

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

Is it about the magic thing? It's not a nerf if you read further. He just can't kill with magic, it doesn't say can't use any magic. So he use that as loophole

3yr
dukkeh
dukkehLv4

Haven't read the story yet, but giving a temporary nerf when world hopping is rather reasonable if MC at full power could just stomp everyone in that world. As mentioned "being unable to kill someone using magic" is not that bad as it forces MC to fight using his physical body and use his brain to solve his problems instead of brute forcing throught them. But yeah. Nerfs are pretty common in webnovel because people cry for no reason when MC gets "op" too fast while forgetting about how fast the canon characters grew in power, so I can somewhat understand the your pain.

2yr
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8ightbit
8ightbitLv4

I honestly don't know how to describe this.. The story progression is extremely slow and longwinded.. Like for example, MC goes on his first mission, at chapter 28.. The comedy is practically non-existent and dry to the point that you'd find more moisture on the crusty feet of your 95 year old grandmother.. The story is extremely dull and there's no progression, quite literally.. Like one moment MC is just a normal guy, then suddenly decides to becomes a cannibal that drinks blood willingly without batting an eye, and even takes great pleasure from it.. it is just disgusting and weird.. Like what sane person would do that, MC was normal???? idk what author is doing with this story tbh, I feel like, he wants the MC personality to be "cool" "baddass" or "mysterious" ..... unless, your a immature little brat, that thinks frowning or doing the duckface when you're getting your picture taken is cool, it is none of those.. I can only describe MC as; "Ughh".. yes, that's how I describe it folks.. ^^ MC is not interesting, and that is basically a fanfic killer, because, If your MC isn't good or interesting then, why would anyone read this? There's no planning or structure to the story, it is too serious, a smidge of darkness and basically boring.. and this story wasn't meant to be those things, It is about traveling the omni-verse where characters of fiction come alive! It is about MC having fun in basically infinite worlds.. It is none of that and a disappointment.. so yeah.. this is my review.. If you found it helpful you're welcome for the time saved.. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability of Updates - 3/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 2/5 Overall/total - 1.8 / 5

3yr

swiftdao
swiftdaoLv13

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

3yr
akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

mc is a cannibal and drinks blood also he somehow unlocks blood dragon slayer magic by being a cannibal. ... .... .... .... .... .... .... ...

3yr
nurarihyon_godking
nurarihyon_godkingLv3

So stupid The protagonist gathers every woman he sees How to develop relationships is not well narrated one question? Why was Kanae absorbed by MC as soon as he was revived? Or why Kei decided to become Ryuu's wife and why Nezuko or the other kids show no reaction

3yr
Abysschan
AbysschanLv1

Story is interesting for me.I will give it a five stars but because i think that mc will think with his lower body i will give it three and maybe a four if mc do not destroy the story.And i dont know what to say but is a great story for passing time.

3yr
Marianne_de
Marianne_deLv4

This was not that entertaining as the FF was generic and mc was just plain and normal. I know that this is the whole point of the FF(normal guy gets a group chat and collects girls) but this is getting repetitive, almost every FF out there is the same.

3yr
ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3

Countless chapters of the MC hiding power, being nerfed and continuously simping women when they disrespect him only for the author to drop. Pathetic.

2yr
DaoistAXe9PI
DaoistAXe9PILv10

Ótima fan-fic, muito boa 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
LostThe50_50
LostThe50_50Lv6

dead.....its just dead, the words character development and world building is non-existent. They just dont exist, not to mention.....the dry overused jokes that most people dont get or just isnt funny.......its just cringe....😖😖😖 whatever, i hope you well wishes on your writing.

3yr
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