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Authority_Lv33yr
2022-03-01 04:02

Drop in chapter 28, The MC is an insufferable hypocrite, but what made me drop was the nerf to the system when he goes on a mission to another world. The nerf is unacceptable, it reduces the whole story to a ridiculous joke.

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

Is it about the magic thing? It's not a nerf if you read further. He just can't kill with magic, it doesn't say can't use any magic. So he use that as loophole

dukkeh
dukkehLv4

Haven't read the story yet, but giving a temporary nerf when world hopping is rather reasonable if MC at full power could just stomp everyone in that world. As mentioned "being unable to kill someone using magic" is not that bad as it forces MC to fight using his physical body and use his brain to solve his problems instead of brute forcing throught them. But yeah. Nerfs are pretty common in webnovel because people cry for no reason when MC gets "op" too fast while forgetting about how fast the canon characters grew in power, so I can somewhat understand the your pain.

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8ightbit
8ightbitLv4

I honestly don't know how to describe this.. The story progression is extremely slow and longwinded.. Like for example, MC goes on his first mission, at chapter 28.. The comedy is practically non-existent and dry to the point that you'd find more moisture on the crusty feet of your 95 year old grandmother.. The story is extremely dull and there's no progression, quite literally.. Like one moment MC is just a normal guy, then suddenly decides to becomes a cannibal that drinks blood willingly without batting an eye, and even takes great pleasure from it.. it is just disgusting and weird.. Like what sane person would do that, MC was normal???? idk what author is doing with this story tbh, I feel like, he wants the MC personality to be "cool" "baddass" or "mysterious" ..... unless, your a immature little brat, that thinks frowning or doing the duckface when you're getting your picture taken is cool, it is none of those.. I can only describe MC as; "Ughh".. yes, that's how I describe it folks.. ^^ MC is not interesting, and that is basically a fanfic killer, because, If your MC isn't good or interesting then, why would anyone read this? There's no planning or structure to the story, it is too serious, a smidge of darkness and basically boring.. and this story wasn't meant to be those things, It is about traveling the omni-verse where characters of fiction come alive! It is about MC having fun in basically infinite worlds.. It is none of that and a disappointment.. so yeah.. this is my review.. If you found it helpful you're welcome for the time saved.. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability of Updates - 3/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 2/5 Overall/total - 1.8 / 5

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