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Hello to all who have supported this story and continue to do so. It makes me very happy. I have started to rewrite the story and I am very happy with the result I am getting, so I hope you like it too. I have made some arrangements in the plot that you will notice as I progress and yes, now everything is well organized and planned. Sorry for the inconvenience above :C I hope you enjoy these adventures together with the protagonist and that the events surprise you as much as they surprised me while I was imagining them :D Be patient with the story as it is unfolding. I hope to provide illustrations for you soon for a better understanding. Sincerely, A.A.K

The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .

The amount of references that I have found reading your story is really great, I really had a great time. I will wait for the next chapters, keep it up.

This story is absolutely amazing and intriguing. The synopsis had me hooked and I am eager to read the whole story. Keep up the good work author.

I read the synopsis, and it looks interesting. I'm adding it to my library and will update my review once I give it a read. Keep up the hard work, author! ... Review-swap with my novel: Amara - Reunion ... One tip from a fellow author: steady updates will get you featured on the main page, and that is the best way to get readers to notice your novel. Good luck!

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The plot itself really could pique someone's interest. Great choice of genre! The writing style is good and I haven't noticed any major issues with grammar. Overall, the story is a must-read! I suggest you update regularly so that we can be pampered with chapters. ^^

Overall this is very good, the title isn't the best but I understand considering web novel won't let two novels have the same name. But the cover looks good and the writing and story are both good. Also, I love all the references.

Nice skills of writing nice explaining story plot line is good too character designs are nice too everything is good in all in the end And good luck author

Synopsis is good. Story starts off a bit slow imo but it evidently gets going pretty soon. I didn't really notice any problems with your grammar. Your descriptions were pretty good for both characters and background. Mostly characters though as world background could use a tad bit more touch to it. Overall I couldn't find anything to mark you down for so you can take the full 5. Good job so far.

I read the synopsis and reviews here.then tried the novel it's amazing how the character and storyline depicted. Now I want more chapter now

I will start from the beginning :) The cover page is original. The title... in general I don't like most of the titles on Webnovel, but I know that the app prevents you from adding titles that already exist, etc. so can be problematic to find it title, that will relevant to the content. Yours is really great. It makes me inquisitive about the content. That's a big part of success as writers say. From the synopsis looks that you have an attractive idea. The synopsis itself is nicely written. After a few chapters I have read, I have to say that you don't struggle, like most of us (not english speakers) with tenses, style or grammar. Just pay more attention to punctuation, etc. (wanted to point a few things in the text but couldn't add a comment - have funy settings on my screan). The storyline in inetersting, characters also. You're doing great job!

I'm really feeling a sort of huge big story from the premise and that this story could become really good and as more chapters come out I hope to see that the story follows the tone it has set all the best author!

This will definitely be a worthwhile read! I've become very interested because of the synopsis and as I read the chapters I got into it even more. Great writing style as well, I hope the author writes more. Will keep this in my library to wait for the future chapters. ♡

I do not usually read the sci-fi genre story but this one is entertaining. I like the way the author has described the city and the names of the city are quite interesting. Keep up the good work author.

This is such a good mixing of Sci fi and fantasy! There is also a little bit of comedy and I am liking it very much. Keep up the good work author!, I'm sure this will get popular soon!

Well then, I don't usually read a lot of sci-fi or cyberpunk stories, but I do enjoy it from time to time, and I have to say that I liked this one quite a bit! Review time, first the world, it's very well made and described really well! The characters are really funny and engaging they take the medal right away and to top it all off it's very well written with no mistakes that I took notice off! There's just one downside, only 4 chapters (as of writing this) which is a shame, but I will keep a close eye on it!

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