Septic_Red
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Septic_Red8mthPostedThe story is a common one on this vast sea of genres. It possesses some good characters and a general good plot to entertain your boring life. The pacing seem to be alright. But the grammar is something that should be worked on regularly. Thankfully there are several tools who can help in this case, but who do I judge on grammar that even I am having big trouble since English is my second language.
- Septic_Red8mthCommentedCh 1 Forgiveness
- Septic_Red9mthReplied to Doctor_BlueCh 1 Prologue
- Septic_Red1yrPosted
Writing quality: needs some improvement in my opinion, but everyone has his starts Stability of updates: It looks alright. Story development: It looks promising. Gotta keep an eye on it. Character design: Kinda looks average to today web novels. World Background: It looks promising. Additional note: Do some small edits here and there at grammatical, and it will look average for Webnovel standards.
- Septic_Red1yrPosted
I am not a big fan of the Contemporary Romance, but I can honestly say this a great work on this website. I will keep an eye on this novel to see how it will evolve. Still, a work with over 100 chapters, but with no reviews and very small number views it is something you do not see every day. The author must've been stacking chapters and decided to release whenever he wanted. In this case, I would recommend posting the numbers of chapters daily on this website, since it works in the favour of the algorithm. Anyway, the story here it looks promising. Carry on!
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I do not think any human would say this whole paragraph while he was tied upside down with blood dripping out.
"Can I be unhanged? I did not do any harm to you as per my conscious knowledge goes. If I have hurt you anyway unknowingly then please do forgive me and just unhang me. I am ready to do anything you ask. You just say it. If you want money, I am ready to give you as much as you like. If, if, you are a guardian of this girl and you want her novel published, consider it is done, I will take charge to make it a best seller. Sorry, Veronica is so brilliant and her plot is so fantastic that I just need to publish it and it will soar high like an eagle in the market of books." - Septic_Red1yrCommented"The idea is as brilliant and unique as your beautiful name is," he said and took her hand in his; played with it for few seconds; then kissed it. He looked at her eyes then to see any sign of fear or shock or was she blushing red with coyness. But she was neither shocked, nor shy. Her eyes were uncontrollably red. She was angry.
- Septic_Red1yrCommented
"A fantastic romance" more like "A common romance"
Then he grinned and added, "Nice romantic and adventure story it will become. You have talent. Genius. A fantastic romance." - Septic_Red1yrCommented
I like this long chapter. It describes the main characters of this novel. However, some readers from this website will find the long paragraphs to be boring and not interested. For me personally, these long paragraphs will give what a written novel and not a digital novel does, the first person persepective.
Ch 1 1. The Interview - Septic_Red2yrPosted
- Septic_Red2yrPosted
I am not into this type of novels, romance and drama, but it kinda works. The plot sounds sad for some readers as I can see the comments, but for me, it didn't seemed that sad because things like that happens in some moments of life. The Main Character is an interesting choice here. And the cover would most likely attract young audiences who are either 13 or 15 and got at that phase. Anyway, Good novel. And carry on.
- Septic_Red2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1
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It's normal for a biologist to like insects. Believe me.
Likes: Insects, plants, flowers, milk tea, iced coffee, aesthetic photographs - Septic_Red2yrCommented
The professor:
"I believe you know who he is," the president smiles. "Former professor Princeton Oswald." - Septic_Red2yrCommented
Since when Archeologist afford limos?!
The next day, Ephraim woke up early. He slept about 2 AM and woke around 5 AM, unboxed some things, and then he did his morning routine until he commuted to the Town Square where he was told to be picked up. A limousine came thereafter 8 AM sharp and he was soon riding the limo with tough men in black suits. - Septic_Red2yrCommented
How did you know I live like this?!
It was already past midnight, and Ephraim's lamp was 24/7 lit up. He was stuck on his newly-bought apartment, shut himself on the bedroom for the whole day—and whole night. There were still unboxed appliances around his room. Cup noodles and instantly made meals are stacked like a tower just under his desk, and then books of astronomy were scattered across the whole room. Its entirety almost covered in papers with scribbled names of galaxies and constellations, some sketches of the solar system, and several variations of drafts of outline and questions. - Septic_Red2yrCommented
It would've been funny if it was like this
Lucian, Kyle, and Geralt's face turned pale. Professor Oswald was sitting beside them—with a tray on their table. SINCE when was he here? The professor smiled at Lucian. - Septic_Red2yrCommented
Ephraim *sighs*: Why are we still here? Just to suffer.
Ephraim exited the room they rented, and then as he got out, he held his knuckles, which was turning white from clenching his fist the whole minute he was inside. - Septic_Red2yrCommented
"Who said Archeologist are boring?" Well... The upperclassmen, the people with no life, Karen, blue haired Tumblr users, Gen Z, Millennials, Hipsters, Americans from rich states, YouTubers, Dream Stans, BTS Stans etc.
The night ended with Ephraim smiling as he observes the entirety from his spectacles. All of his friends, his classmates, are now wasted and mumbling. Mugs of beers, sushi, and some karaage were scattered across the whole room. Who said Archeologists are boring?