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I will start from the beginning :) The cover page is original. The title... in general I don't like most of the titles on Webnovel, but I know that the app prevents you from adding titles that already exist, etc. so can be problematic to find it title, that will relevant to the content. Yours is really great. It makes me inquisitive about the content. That's a big part of success as writers say. From the synopsis looks that you have an attractive idea. The synopsis itself is nicely written. After a few chapters I have read, I have to say that you don't struggle, like most of us (not english speakers) with tenses, style or grammar. Just pay more attention to punctuation, etc. (wanted to point a few things in the text but couldn't add a comment - have funy settings on my screan). The storyline in inetersting, characters also. You're doing great job!