"The water hears and understands but the ice does not forgive." - Six of Crows, Leigh Bardugo Hey there! I am a modern-day writer of fantasy and romance. ❣ Discord: aoiYuki#6531
I'm really amazed by the dramatic vibes of the initial chapters. It gets you in the mood and the next thing you know, you're completely engrossed in the novel and already twenty chapters ahead!
A novel filled with adventure and heart-racing scenes! It has a hint of uniqueness in it that sets it aside from the other system novels I've read so far! I hope the author continues to write more chapters, it's really good. And of course, his use of metaphors really spices up the writing style. I love it, I'll keep this in my library.
"snowy skin"? i thought he had dark skin though
avoid repetitions, other words can be heavily-built man, sturdy-looking man, man ripped with muscles etc. ~
author's note: i'm so sorry, bc of the my stupidity, i can't omit this phrase for some reason... pls forgive me 😢
oohh ~ a fellow Potterhead! 😊⚡