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"The water hears and understands but the ice does not forgive." - Six of Crows, Leigh Bardugo Hey there! I am a modern-day writer of fantasy and romance. ❣ Discord: aoiYuki#6531

2020-09-26 JoinedPhilippines
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki5h
    Posted

    I'm really amazed by the dramatic vibes of the initial chapters. It gets you in the mood and the next thing you know, you're completely engrossed in the novel and already twenty chapters ahead!

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    Crowning Cruel Crow
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki5h
    Posted

    A novel filled with adventure and heart-racing scenes! It has a hint of uniqueness in it that sets it aside from the other system novels I've read so far! I hope the author continues to write more chapters, it's really good. And of course, his use of metaphors really spices up the writing style. I love it, I'll keep this in my library.

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    Blood Burning Blood
    Fantasy · TacoKun
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki5h
    Commented

    "snowy skin"? i thought he had dark skin though

    Kalix was a killer of panties, blue eyed and long nosed. His sharp features and snowy skin could make women bleed with bloody infatuation. The golden tattoos across his neck symbolized his crowning pride as the young lord of the Woric Tribe. He wore black armor, black woolen pants, and a white fur coat that ran from his well-molded jaw to his black boots. No person could say he was a monster unless his reputation was learned.
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    Blood Burning Blood
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki5h
    Commented

    avoid repetitions, other words can be heavily-built man, sturdy-looking man, man ripped with muscles etc. ~

    Azkiel clasped the fork and dashed. When he was two steps away from his first opponent, Azkiel ducked as low as he can. The masculine man's axe passed right through him, an inch away from peeling his face. The masculine staggered. Taking the chance, Azkiel stabbed the fork towards the head of the masculine man. The metallic utensil pierced through his opponent's flesh which was soft as pie.
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    Blood Burning Blood
    Fantasy · TacoKun
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki5h
    Replied to aoiYuki

    ah but it's just a suggestion, don't think too much abt it 😁

    Ch 1 Stabbing Sausage
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki5h
    Commented

    hmmm idk if it's just bc i'm a girl but reading "panties" repeatedly is very odd. might want to replace the other ones with "(women's) undergarments or underwear" I love the 1st chapter though, it's very thrilling ~

    Ch 1 Stabbing Sausage
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    Blood Burning Blood
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki6h
    Replied to L_Sluggy
    Ch 98 Surrender
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
    Fantasy Romance · aoiYuki
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki3d
    Replied to L_Sluggy

    hope you enjoy ~

    Ch 93 Something to tell you
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki4d
    Commented
    "And become the Glow, for others to follow." Elyon finished his favorite quote with a grin.
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki7d
    Replied to L_Sluggy

    Thank you so much!! (✿^‿^)

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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
    Fantasy Romance · aoiYuki
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki7d
    Replied to L_Sluggy

    thank you, dear! i'm very glad to know someone likes to read my work (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。

    Ch 89 Odd names
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki14d
    Commented

    author's note: i'm so sorry, bc of the my stupidity, i can't omit this phrase for some reason... pls forgive me 😢

    [The sound came from my left, then right and then from above—she was everywhere. "Whatever happens, don't let go." Lavi said, squeezing]
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki24d
    Replied to l_tah

    Haha so my guess was right that you own those accounts. Thank you! Knowing that you're enjoying my story is very motivating. It keeps me going. I hope you continue reading my work. 💖

    Ch 73 Love is war
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki28d
    Replied to Jellybean_00

    I'm very happy that you love what I do 😊💙

    Ch 70 It's my fault
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 Where Am I?
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki1mth
    Replied to Jellybean_00

    Omgggg!! Thank youuu 😭💖

    Ch 66 Do it
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki1mth
    Replied to Jellybean_00

    It's totally fine, dear! Thank you so much for reading my chapters ~ 😊💙

    Ch 66 Do it
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki1mth
    Replied to Jellybean_00

    Thanks so much, dearie 😘💚

    Ch 63 The Phantom Thief
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki1mth
    Replied to Jellybean_00

    Whoaaa! You're now one of my most fave readers too--for always motivating me ~ 🤗💋

    Ch 63 The Phantom Thief
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  • aoiYuki
    aoiYuki1mth
    Replied to Daoist999248

    oohh ~ a fellow Potterhead! 😊⚡

    "Right, good story," Lavi stated. "But what does this have to do with you leading us into a tight passageway? Is there a Chamber of Secrets here or something?"
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    As The Wind Whispers Upon The Flowers
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