aoiYuki
"The water hears and understands but the ice does not forgive." - Six of Crows, Leigh Bardugo Hey there! I am a modern-day writer of fantasy and romance. ❣ Discord: aoiYuki#6531
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aoiYuki5hPostedA novel filled with adventure and heart-racing scenes! It has a hint of uniqueness in it that sets it aside from the other system novels I've read so far! I hope the author continues to write more chapters, it's really good. And of course, his use of metaphors really spices up the writing style. I love it, I'll keep this in my library.
- aoiYuki5hCommented
"snowy skin"? i thought he had dark skin though
Kalix was a killer of panties, blue eyed and long nosed. His sharp features and snowy skin could make women bleed with bloody infatuation. The golden tattoos across his neck symbolized his crowning pride as the young lord of the Woric Tribe. He wore black armor, black woolen pants, and a white fur coat that ran from his well-molded jaw to his black boots. No person could say he was a monster unless his reputation was learned. - aoiYuki5hCommented
avoid repetitions, other words can be heavily-built man, sturdy-looking man, man ripped with muscles etc. ~
Azkiel clasped the fork and dashed. When he was two steps away from his first opponent, Azkiel ducked as low as he can. The masculine man's axe passed right through him, an inch away from peeling his face. The masculine staggered. Taking the chance, Azkiel stabbed the fork towards the head of the masculine man. The metallic utensil pierced through his opponent's flesh which was soft as pie. - aoiYuki5hReplied to aoiYukiCh 1 Stabbing Sausage
- aoiYuki6hReplied to L_SluggyCh 98 Surrender
- aoiYuki3dReplied to L_SluggyCh 93 Something to tell you
- aoiYuki4dCommented"And become the Glow, for others to follow." Elyon finished his favorite quote with a grin.
- aoiYuki7dReplied to L_Sluggy
- aoiYuki7dReplied to L_SluggyCh 89 Odd names
- aoiYuki14dCommented
author's note: i'm so sorry, bc of the my stupidity, i can't omit this phrase for some reason... pls forgive me 😢
[The sound came from my left, then right and then from above—she was everywhere. "Whatever happens, don't let go." Lavi said, squeezing] - aoiYuki28dReplied to Jellybean_00Ch 70 It's my fault
- aoiYuki1mthCommentedCh 1 Where Am I?
- aoiYuki1mthReplied to Jellybean_00Ch 66 Do it
- aoiYuki1mthReplied to Jellybean_00Ch 66 Do it
- aoiYuki1mthReplied to Jellybean_00Ch 63 The Phantom Thief
- aoiYuki1mthReplied to Jellybean_00Ch 63 The Phantom Thief
- aoiYuki1mthReplied to Daoist999248
oohh ~ a fellow Potterhead! 😊⚡
"Right, good story," Lavi stated. "But what does this have to do with you leading us into a tight passageway? Is there a Chamber of Secrets here or something?"
