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Synopsis is good. Story starts off a bit slow imo but it evidently gets going pretty soon. I didn't really notice any problems with your grammar. Your descriptions were pretty good for both characters and background. Mostly characters though as world background could use a tad bit more touch to it. Overall I couldn't find anything to mark you down for so you can take the full 5. Good job so far.