Thank you so much for the gift!

Enjoying this story a lot, if you have some time give it a read. It is your standard isaki story with fantasy attached. If you like this genre or type of story then you should give this a read.

Who knows? I do have a few ideas though.

no problem more will be out tomorrow. 👍

Thank you. Did you enjoy the story?

At this point, I think the other 325 reviews say everything and anything that I possibly could. The story is good and you should honestly give it a shot, if not I don't get why.

So what did you guys think?

thank you, I hope for this to one day be a manga. I appreciate your feedback and hope to use it to make this piece the best in can

Well I will say this is quite an interesting story, and the twist makes me wanna read more, sadly I keep thinking of Edward from Twilight. No one can beat him but hey at least the story is good.

thank you

Your right I definitely need to work on that.

thank you

thank you so much for your honest review, I will take everything to heart. I really appreciate your help

I mean fair point, I didn't explain that due to high player count, players were only allowed one character. To help servers, I will now add that detail, thank you.

Got it I will remove it, sorry.

Simply put if you are a fan of Avatar then you are going to like this, the first chapter shows a nice spin on it while keeping the story unique and interesting. Overall read it!

Oof

Oh damn, that is interesting. He is an npc based on the memories of a real person. And the real person died leaving only the npc alive. Damn.

Thank you so much

Well, this is not what I was expecting from a fantasy story, but it was good nonetheless. The grammar is good, the story is well put together and you can easily understand the characters. Overall good job keep up the great work author.