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CorwynGentry

CorwynGentry

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I like to write is that not enough?

2020-12-02 JoinedUnited States
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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Posted

    At this point, I think the other 325 reviews say everything and anything that I possibly could. The story is good and you should honestly give it a shot, if not I don't get why.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Commented

    So what did you guys think?

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to Akira_Monadelle

    thank you, I hope for this to one day be a manga. I appreciate your feedback and hope to use it to make this piece the best in can

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Posted

    Well I will say this is quite an interesting story, and the twist makes me wanna read more, sadly I keep thinking of Edward from Twilight. No one can beat him but hey at least the story is good.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Commented

    thank you

    Ch 1 Consume Me In This New World / Into The Unknown
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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to JWhite_9988

    Your right I definitely need to work on that.

    "This was my last chance, but there's nothing here, not even a goblin hideout, damnit, what am I supposed to do now?" Ishikawa wept as tears rolled down his cheeks. against the boarded-up mine. Slowly, his sadness turned into fury, and he raised his left arm and began to strike the boards with his fist. Following the third bash, he felt them shifting under the continuous assault. One of the boards had come loose, revealing an entrance to the cave. Seeing the unfolding scene in front of him, Ishikawa sat in complete disbelief. Without a second's hesitation, he plunged into the tiny hole, fearing that it would close at any moment. When he entered, he couldn't see anything; an enveloping blackness enveloped him, leaving him blind. After frantically searching for anything he came across what felt like an old wall torch, then with ease he was able to lift the torch out of the holster and grab it in his hand, it lit up almost immediately revealing a small blue system message that reads "You have entered The Cave of Genesis".
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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    thank you

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    thank you so much for your honest review, I will take everything to heart. I really appreciate your help

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    I mean fair point, I didn't explain that due to high player count, players were only allowed one character. To help servers, I will now add that detail, thank you.

    Well, I've been searching for Leviathan Plague, an in-game disease that allows players to gain 5% experience and stat bonuses. It may not seem like something to strive for, and most players won't even bother trying to get the disease until they are as close as possible to level one hundred. I have a theory that if despite all odds, you get infected at level 1, your stats will increase by 5% every time you level up. This may not seem like much, but if I'm right, it will eventually make me the most powerful player to ever play this game.
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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    Got it I will remove it, sorry.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Posted

    Simply put if you are a fan of Avatar then you are going to like this, the first chapter shows a nice spin on it while keeping the story unique and interesting. Overall read it!

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Commented

    Oof

    The more he thought the angrier and more frustrated he got, going as far as to nibble on his nails. His current disheveled face with dirt stains and a beard filled with grime made him look like a madman, but for most players around him who were still ignorant about the world, they considered him a background flavor NPC and didn't think to approach him due to his looks.
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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Commented

    Oh damn, that is interesting. He is an npc based on the memories of a real person. And the real person died leaving only the npc alive. Damn.

    Though it seemed this revival in the past is not without a price, looking at the empty spot beside his siblings, he knew that he may not exist in the real world anymore. He had already waited for a while for a different 'him' to log into the game, but from the way his older brother and sister were leaving the area, it seemed they were not going to wait for someone other to log in too.
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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to JI_Ah44_LEE

    Thank you so much

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Posted

    Well, this is not what I was expecting from a fantasy story, but it was good nonetheless. The grammar is good, the story is well put together and you can easily understand the characters. Overall good job keep up the great work author.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Commented

    It's hard losing a loved one, I can't even imagine losing my mother.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to DyaAran

    Thank you!

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to DyaAran

    Thank you so much that means a lot to me. I plan on keeping this work going as long as possible.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to DyaAran

    Thank you so much I apricate it a lot.

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  • CorwynGentry
    CorwynGentry5mth
    Replied to OneClaudia

    Lol

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