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I write novels. I'm the author of the fantasy work 'HEAVENS SLAYER' Please read it!

2020-08-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark1mth
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    This book is really really amazing! The MC is really amazing with his thoughts, he is imperfect as he suffers with various disorders like dyslexia and else (so comes the name of the book) but his personality is straight up badass. Writing quality of this book is clearly comedic and the plot is very original. Trust me everyone, just read it to the third chap and you'll start loving this book!

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark1mth
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    This is awesome!

    Ch 3 03 Friend indeed!
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    Bruh the MC's body is kinda messed up 馃槶馃槶

    She ran near to me and shook her head saying yes. We walked our way to the bus stop spending time together. The thing is that she kinda like seems to be making fun of me all the time. I feel like she is stammering her words on purpose ( yeah I'm like a little pile of laundry, I got a hand full of disorders like bipolar, MDD, and minor dyslexia. Hehe I'm a big mess). It kinda like rages me most of the time.
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark1mth
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    Lol i like the mc

    Ch 2 02 Never expected it
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark1mth
    Commented

    Ooh nice beginning

    Ch 1 01 First shot
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark1mth
    Replied to Luca_Stark

    馃槀馃槶

    -Son, from today onwards you aren't part of our family anymore, garbage, we hope you'll die, beep!"The call ended.
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
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    A really well placed book with brilliantly sketched out characters that are a part of a fantasy world with level system and other magical elements. This novel will definitely reach a high stature, once you start updating more chapters that is. Everything else including the writing quality is really awesome, just a lil bit of typos but you can understand the story in a vivid way. Best of luck!

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    Replied to P1G3ON

    Yes! But he will be around chapter 110+

    "Well you could say that! So are you here to become a slayer too? If yes then we could form a party with that miss over there." He pointed his finger towards a Lady who was wearing a red Armor which looked thin but was built with MEGALITHIUM. It was a metal which was discovered from the demon's world. It was thin but it was so hard that even if someone used all of his force attacking it with a hammer, it would have no effect.
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    Hello everyone! The second generation of heavens slayer is over now! It was a long journey where many people died. But, at the end, Alcesto and friends achieved victory! Now, what is lying for the massive plot which will start from next chapter?! The third generation will be of more than 120 chapters! Each with 1.5k words! Stay tuned!

    Ch 85 CHAPTER - 85 - BATTLE FINALIZED
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
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    Hmmm this chapter had some good comedy. And, all of the words 'than' should be replaced with 'then'. There might be a few mistakes in the early chapters but you'll become a pro once you develop a habit of writing. Best of luck! I'm stuck with this novel 馃コ

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
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    I would like to suggest you to change the paragraph whenever two different characters are talking. Change the paragraph at (...robot.") Some people may get confused of the current way. This will be much better. 馃榿馃憣

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    馃ぃ

    "Are you a robot or something?" She couldn't help but voice out her thoughts.
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    Lemon flavoured juice 馃槤

    "Here you go." The juice was lemon flavour, it's sour taste would make anyone rejuvenated. Her intention to get a reaction out of the boy was quite clear.
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
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    *then* a juice will do...

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    馃槀

    One thing was of certainly, he looked even more dead than before, someone could mistake him as a corpse and no one could even argue about it.
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
    Replied to Nikola_Niko

    Lol, the first 20 chapters are just a prologue 馃槈

    CHAPTER - 3 - THE GODS
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
    Replied to Nikola_Niko

    Nope ,I loke the rich big shot with attitude 馃槑馃槑

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
    Replied to Nikola_Niko

    Oof, never realized the typo 馃拃

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2mth
    Commented

    Nice beginning

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  • Zoro_The_Dark
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    Boy couldn't care less as if he were used to things like that

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