Septic_Red
With currently 107 chapters, it's a really amazing novel. It's a slow burn as you start, with us exploring more about our MC and I like the way how characters tells us about his experiences as he goes on with his adventure. I also like the subtle use of humor at the beginning, tbh I haven't been able to finish it but it's surely is very well as I am continuing. I am also eager to learn more about the characters and story as I will continue reading this. Really a great work! KEEP UP!đ There are some grammatical errors at the beginning chapters but it's really a small thing looking at the hardwork you are putting in it, with the amount of chapters you have written it's hard to find everything. But none the less it's a great work!â¤ď¸
I have read almost 30 chapters and honestly, this novel it is not perfect, or bad, it is average. The author has really done a great job showing the story of a young warrior and I also love Fiona's character, she doesn't seem useless and also, I love the fact the MC doesn't have any attraction to her. Carry on author!
The world background is excellent. The writing quality is solid. I would say that the combat could use some more description to make it more enjoyable. Remember, show don't tell. Display the combat sequences so we can picture it in our heads. Keep up the good work author and remember there is always room for improvement. I can tell you're creative because you're always adding new content. These type of stories with spells and wizards are not my genre of choice so I can only give general feedback. But you do a good job explaining things.
This story has good pacing and a relatively average mc in terms of his personality. Probably because of his age. I like the fact of him starting from scratch tho, not easily becoming overpowered right off the bat. There were minor inconsistencies and grammar errors, but those can be corrected easily. I like the pace since it doesn't overwhelm the readers with a lavish world and lots of characters in the beginning. The plot is also curious, but no longer novel or new for this genre. I suggest to widen the description of the world here, to make it even more vivid. Its already good, but it can be better. Anyways, keep going!
So dear author, I am not going to sugar coat anything. First, your story is riddled with grammatical errors. You mix up the nouns and tenses. Then there is the issue of punctuation. If you could take time and correct those, I guarantee you that your story e be very interesting. That being said, I give you props for writing. It's really hard to write and update regularly but you have soldiered on. Keep it up
Shameless review, again! It is amazing how times flies sometimes. I have started this project one year ago due to the fact I was bored and wanted to start the writing on a site instead of on word and try to send these novels I am currently writing on this amazing site. In almost one year I have made 100 chapters with an amazing story, adventures, great characters, mysteries, beautiful backgrounds, incredible beast and also some memorable moments. Cheers to another year! And 100 more chapters.