Great start! I can relate to this story too much! That's why I just fall for it! And I have to admit that you have a great skill of writing! So, keep it up! I can't believe it's your first work! But, little suggestion for you. Please try to update your book regularly. However, synopsis is interesting and plot is really well defined. Keep it up dear author! I cheer you!

I appreciate it

I am relieved that you like it!🤩

What can I do?

Nice work! Though I am not that good but I will suggest you to update your synopsis. You can write a very short summery and describe what your story is about in your synopsis. However, this is going to be a great story! You described everything so nicely that I could feel the vibe of the story! Great work! Keep going!

I feel totally different vibe in this story! It's a great idea! I never read such kind of book anywhere! Synopsis is too much attractive and it can drag anyone to the story! Plot is really going smoothly and I am really excited to see where the story ends with! KEEP IT UP dear author! I APPRECIATE YOU!

Sure!☺️

Yes, it's Aisya#1001☺️

Thanks for your great advice!

Wow! Just great! The author have a great skill of writing! It's very unique and interesting! I add this book in my library so that I will read it slowly and learn some techniques from you. Now time for a review..... Synopsis is very interesting and plot is really very well defined. I feel like I went into the story! Great job author! Keep it up! I loved it!

It's so realistic that I felt I was in the book! Great work author! If I didn't read the synopsis I would never know by reading first chapters that the MC is in a game. Synopsis is quite interesting and plot is really well defined. I really hooked up to the book! Keep it up! I cheer you!

This is an unique and interesting story I have ever read! Synopsis is interesting and plot is really well defined. The story is going smoothly and as the author wrote it in very detailed, I didn't find plothole much. Keep it up dear author! I appreciate it!

Though I don't read war and history much, I found it interesting! The synopsis is very interesting. Plot is well defined. Everything has written in details and I liked it! A great story with a great skill! Keep it up! I appreciate it!

I just got blushed!☺️ But I will be more happy if you add my book in your library 😉. I know I am being shameless 🤭

I just wrote the truth. It's really unique and interesting!

I couldn't move my eyes from it, honestly! It's a great story since I like this kinds of story I just fall for it. I will read it in my leisure so I add this in my library. Synopsis was too much interesting and plot is really well defined. Keep it up dear author! I appreciate it!

Nice Nice Nice Nice! I love it! Since I love this kind of story, I just fall for it! I will add it to my library and sure want a lots of chapters! Please dear author keep updating! I am hungry for your blood! Sorry, I am not a zombie like them but I truly want more chapters to read!

I don't know if it's your first work or not but I really admit it's a great story so far! I like the synopsis and plot also. It was too interesting. Keep up the great work with your great thoughts! I appreciate it!

Yuck! She ate mud!!!🤢