Review Detail of Mayemura in Legacy of Judah Gremory

So dear author, I am not going to sugar coat anything. First, your story is riddled with grammatical errors. You mix up the nouns and tenses. Then there is the issue of punctuation. If you could take time and correct those, I guarantee you that your story e be very interesting. That being said, I give you props for writing. It's really hard to write and update regularly but you have soldiered on. Keep it up