Love the story for now with the concept of demon host a bit like naruto so keep it up

I love the way you have put a real personality to your characters, and also the story development is quite interesting. Keep up the work, this story is great

So AISB is easy huh! LOL

Yes, it is, as the new author I will explain the outside world better, and how status really affects the society in this novel

I did realize it as well... I am the new author of the book, and after reading it, I must say that there is not much detail on the side characters and he was focusing on too many characters at a time. Plus, in the last few chapters, he did a few questionable moves concerning the side characters. However, he already told me about his plans, and I plan on executing them, but I still will create a new era for the story without modifying what he has already done.

Absolute control is the evolution of the water elemental

I now get 10k readers per day, how will you beat that!

Don'tt make it weird ok, it's just a mistake

Yeah I don't know

Mistake

wow season 800 or?

I remember reading this story 3 to 4 weeks ago and being very disappointed with the dialogue and the grammar errors. To be honest, during that time I would have given your story 2 stars, however, you have improved your novel putting quotation marks, and improving the grammar. Of course, there are still a few grammatical errors that can be seen, however, I still do understand the essence of what you meant! I do encourage you to make the chapters a bit longer. I do see a lot of improvement in your work, congrats!

Great story the author has written other, however, I suggest long paragraphs when it comes to things like explaining the world background. Shorten paragraphs then I the story will have no problem

I don't know yet, I don't want to spoil, but if you are at the last chapter, you might feel that Jason has a particular type of feeling for one of the female characters

Hey Samuel, when is school starting?

I only read the three first chapters, but I can say that the writing style and the grammar is top notch. Marinette is a very interesting character as well and I hope I will stay till the end!

Really interesting story with a lot of descriptive parts. The explanation and the detail on the building or character appearance is phenomenal, I congratulate the author

Of course, when it comes to the introduction of the story such as giving a brief explanation of the world and the novel, you can also put big paragraphs, it doesn't harm the beauty of the novel

I love the different names you give to your characters!