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YemzKayz1303

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An avid reader with a deep passion for paranormal, fantasy and romance stories. English is not my first language but I try....

2021-04-15 JoinedZimbabwe
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  • YemzKayz1303
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    Replied to Chipochashe_Zhou

    Thank you

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Embrace It Or Erase It
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  • YemzKayz1303
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    Replied to Drakaris

    No that dwarf claimed to be a friend of her master .I am thinking Medusa was her grandma

    Ch 383 Hanging by a thread Part2
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  • YemzKayz1303
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    Commented

    wow

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Thank you 馃挀

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Embrace It Or Erase It
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  • YemzKayz1303
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    Commented

    Xavier, Xavier. I'm beginning to like you馃槃

    Ch 380 Between a rock and hardplace Part2
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  • YemzKayz1303
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    Commented

    so you just killed of Yue like that author?? This is unacceptable

    Ch 376 Realm unsealed Part1
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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Oh oh.Big bad Red ain't stupid.

    Ch 31 If you're not cheating you're not trying (part 4)
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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Oh oh.Big bad Red ain't stupid.

    Ch 31 If you're not cheating you're not trying (part 4)
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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    lol.

    Which perfectly suited his shameless fighting style.
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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    So sad how bullying gets out of hand at times

    Ch 31 I SUFFERED PAIN
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    THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST
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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Yue you're quite daring 馃槀

    Ch 373 Looting and Plundering Part2
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  • YemzKayz1303
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    Posted

    Hello dear author. I will be very honest with you. Your story has so much potential. However, you are making your sentences way too long. A whole paragraph with no full stops. Please be mindful of punctuation marks as well as tenses. If you can edit that, I'm sure your story is a very interesting one.

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Again, please Break it down. Another very very long sentence

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Try breaking this sentence down .You can actually come up with up to four sentences here .

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    This is one very long sentence. why don't you break it down?

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Replied to Heart59

    Thank you for your support. It motivates me and I appreciate that. Hopefully I will not disappoint you.鉂o笍

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    Thank you for the update

    Ch 372 Looting and Plundering Part1
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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Replied to empressblackrose09

    Thank you for your motivation. I really appreciate it.馃挄

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Posted

    A five star rating from author dear. a few typos aren't enough to make me lose interest. World background and character design are on point. This is a great read. Something totally different and I will continue reading. Thank you for writing such a good story. I'm very eager to see how the whole story progresses.

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  • YemzKayz1303
    YemzKayz13031mth
    Commented

    interesting story

    Ch 2 Trapped!
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