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ZEN: Didunia Fiksi

作者: AciaRhel
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Seorang remaja pria yang meninggal karena menyelamatkan teman masa kecilnya. Remaja itu lalu ditemukan oleh sebuah cahaya dan diberikan kehidupan kedua, untuk menjelajahi dunia anime dengan system yang diberikan kepadanya. . . Perhatian: - Saya tidak memiliki karakter apapun yang ada didalam cerita ini. - Saya juga tidak memiliki gambar yang digunakan pada sampul. - Cerita ini akan beralur lambat namun kadang kadang cepat. - Saya adalah penulis baru, saya membuat novel ini hanya karena kesenangan semata dan untuk belajar. Jadi jika ada masukan, saya akan sangat amat terbuka untuk menerimanya.

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1 :Permulaan
2 :Dunia Pertama
3 :Dunia Kedua
4 :Dunia Ketiga

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bullshit, if it was a real person with a real personality then he wouldn't have saved his childhood friend who stayed awayed from him. if his childhood friend didn't scorn him or hate him that he can see then it would have been fine and understandable. But if it is just based on speculation that his childhood friend didn't actually hate him or dislike him then it is definitely bullshit. Everything about how he acts is bullshit. this is practically bullshit written all over it. i mean, if he is a normal person then he wouldn't act anyway he did in the first chapter. for example, imagine you are in his place, your childhood friend stayed away from you and you think that he/she hates or dislikes you, well you probably won't think much of it, probably just mark him/her as someone that doesn't deserve to be seen as a friend or such(actually childhood friends doesn't mean a thing, it just means that it is your friend when you were a child) But then one day, you found your childhood friend(ex-childhood friend) about to fall(or die) but then you went to save him/her, that would be the part where i would call bullshit, that is one of my least favorite event in the story. the author probably didn't know how an ordinary person thinks in a situation, he should at least think what he would feel if he is in that situation. probably going with a cliche reason like the childhood friend doesn't hate mc or dislikes him, he/she can't interact or can't say goodbye to him cuz its urgent business. i just can't read these kinds of things, at first i thought this novel would be good because the starting is quite good, typical mc getting bullied then doesn't hate or dislikes the bullies. I dropped it after reading the first chapter, so if i missed anything then i blame the chapter.

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