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God´s Eyes

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Losing his parent early on, he had to survive in a world he couldn't even see... Blind and left alone, he was seen as a parasite by the social hierarchy of the new ages filled with martial arts and soulbonds Forced to mature early his train of thought was different from his peers as he didn´t mind derogatory reviews about him. The day he awoke his soul was the day he cried in desperation while God played tricks with him as his soul-awakening was a blessing in disguise. Nobody would have ever imagined that he was neither blind nor a parasite until the final moment, he opened his golden eyes that flickered brightly, eagerly waiting to devour everyone daring to obstruct his path towards the summit. Follow Jason on his adventurous journey throughout the vast universe filled with miraculous sceneries and mysterious beings. Some readers might not like information, but I do! ------ Discord-server= https://discord.gg/EdsDgFVWwZ *This is my first novel, please bear that in mind. I appreciate all kinds of sincere advice and comments* ------

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Chapter 1World Bridge-Prologue

[Author's note: If you don't like Info-dumps/masses on details, skip the first 3 Chapters <3]< p>

Once upon a time a single inhabitable planet, known by the name of Argos, existed in a gigantic stellar system. It revolved around the humongous sun, along with dozens of other gaseous planets occupying the stellar system.

The planet truly began to flourish when an intelligent bipedal race that called themselves humans entered the big picture.

This intelligent race socialized, worked together to survive, and advanced more than any other species found on the planet.

Over the course of hundreds of years, humanity was able to mechanize and automate machines. Thus, slowly and steadily the species along with the planet prospered.

Humanity's history was short when compared to the history of the whole planet. But, the species was greedy and impatient. In their haste to advance further, they used and exhausted more limited natural resources than any other race ever did before.

Argos was a giant planet and the population of the human race surpassed the three-digit billions as if it was nothing. Soon, the once giant planet began to fall short of the billions of humans to comfortably inhabit. The tall skyscrapers and high-rise constructions were now not enough to provide shelter to the ever-increasing population.

Thus, mankind would have to leave the stellar system in search of a new planet and a new home to continue to live in, grow and advance even further. 

But it was easier said than done. Humanity needed answers and solutions to overcome the hurdles in traveling through the vast space and exploring new stellar systems.

Many humans prayed to whichever god they wanted to, that something would change and they would make a breakthrough in space traveling.

Years passed as humanity strived to find an answer when a sudden meteor shower shocked humanity to the core. The meteors disintegrated into large chunks of rocks and rained down on the farthest planet of the same stellar system. The force with which this cosmic debris hit the planet was so impactful that it was shattered into millions of pieces.

The meteor shower disappeared as quickly as it had appeared. but the most intriguing part of this event was that the meteor shower came from outside of the stellar system without anyone noticing it beforehand.

In a way, humanity's prayers were answered that day. The human scientists picked up a few remains of the meteorites, which were made of an unknown material that humans had never seen before.

The meteorites radiated a cold yet tranquil energy that seeped into their surroundings radiating a sense of calm in the atmosphere.

This energy was much more powerful than any energy that had ever been discovered by humanity. It even defied the laws of nature, as it made the meteorite levitate from the surface and float in the air.

The scientists were fascinated by the meteorite and conducted in-depth studies that resulted in many discoveries.

One discovery was that the energy that radiated from the meteorites could accelerate the speed of growth of plants and animals.

The scientists studying the meteorite felt more vigorous and became stronger than the average human being. The rate at which their age decelerated made the other humans envious.

For the next several years, the scientists researched the meteorites making path-breaking discoveries in their labs. One fine day, without any prior warning, small cracks began to appear on the meteorite's surface. 

An unmeasurable amount of the still unknown energy began to condense into a blue shining liquid-like ball that peeled its outer stone skin and ascended into the sky.

While most humans around the world were still working, a sudden cataclysmic event struck nature like never before and the whole wildlife went silent.

Only humans on the other side of the planet, far away from the laboratory containing the meteorites, didn't sense the horror that was about to be unleashed on the entire planet.

The blue shining ball with the accumulated mysterious energy continued its ascension until it reached a certain height. It floated ominously, without moving a single inch as if it was suspended mid-air.

All humans in and around the laboratory kept looking at the shining ball with a mixture of apprehension and wonder. They were both anxious and horrified to face the unknown situation.

Humanity's mind was a complex puzzle. 

On one hand, they wanted to do everything to be the dominant force on their planet but on the other hand, any unexpected incident made them cower in fear. 

At that moment, their minds came up with the worst possible scenarios. It gave them goosebumps as they exchanged worried glances, knowing that they were helpless and vulnerable with nothing to defend themselves with!

As they sensed doom crawling towards them, some humans with a weaker will started crying, and a few of them began to hug each other trying to find comfort and solace. While others could only stare into the sky with a blank mind, looking at the ball as if it were a giant time bomb, slowly ticking towards annihilation.

The liquid-ball seemed to get stronger, as a suction force spread around it while it gradually began to shrink in size.

They tried in vain to distance themselves from the suction force that only seemed to grow stronger over time, and looked helplessly at the sky.

The amount of compressed energy inside this blue shining ball, although only the size of a tennis ball, was potent enough to devastate at least half of the continent, if not the whole planet.

Time passed and the scientists noticed a surprising change within the blue shining ball, making them even more nervous than they had already been.

Luckily, the energy was floating in a tranquil and stable state, until the ball shrunk further and reached the size of a ping pong ball.

The compressed energy became more and more unstable after it had reached a certain threshold. The ball began to tremble violently, scaring the living daylights out of all the living beings surrounding the area.

At this moment even the humans on the other side of Argos noticed that something was wrong. The entire planet had tensed up, as if the ball was suffocating it, making it unable to breathe freely.

It seemed that the planet itself was put under a massive threat by the single little energy ball, and nature had gone deathly still, the quietest it had ever been in its history of billions of years.

Space seemed to twist out of nowhere, and blood-red cobweb-like cracks began to appear below the energy ball, giving it a more stable constitution.

The more cracks appeared, the more stable the energy ball seemed, making some humans sigh in relief.

However, their relief barely lasted for a while before similar cracks started to appear all around Argos. These cracks tore through the ocean bed, spread like vines through the jungles, ripped apart the underground, and slashed high in the sky, leaving no space untouched.

Humanity was clueless as to why the sudden cracks had appeared or what they could do, but they could be assured of one thing. There was no way it could have been something good.

Though some were relieved that the blue shining energy ball didn't explode, the others felt that the red cracks didn't seem to be something one wanted to have on the planet either.

The cracks all over the planet grew in size until they reached a certain magnitude. Some were bigger while others were small in size, however, all of them had one particular fact in common.

All the cracks had a blood red lining to them while the inside was pitch-black. Not a single ray of sunlight could pass through the cracks to let humans see what terrors lurked inside if any.

It looked like the way to an endless abyss making the humans' blood run cold.

At the exact same moment, scientists' worst fear came true as the seemingly stable energy ball continued to compress itself causing it to explode.

An astronomical amount of mysterious energy was released into the atmosphere, causing the blood-red cracks to shake violently, twisting the space around them.

Surprisingly the enormous amount of energy didn't devastate the landscape. Instead, it enveloped the whole planet with its blue shining color before it began to invade every living being and the planet itself until it reached the core.

Not a single cell was spared and the whole planet jolted, causing a chain reaction of events. The deathly still nature erupted at once as one disaster after the other occurred in quick succession. Earthquakes, tsunamis, and volcanic explosions ravaged the planet as it was invaded by unknown energy.

Unbeknownst to humanity, Argos was freed of its shackles from billions of years ago and its core was resurrected.

The former pitch-black abyss inside the blood-red cracks changed into hundreds of different colorful landscapes.

While many of these landscapes looked beautiful with majestic mountains, lively forest, and clean oceans, the sight of other cracks wasn't as joyful and beautiful as mankind had thought a moment before.

Hideous-looking creatures with razor-sharp teeth, thick scales, massive tails, and bloodthirst in their eyes stepped through a certain crack while various other dreadful beings entered Argos through the several other cracks.

Bridges between different worlds had just appeared on Argos and the planet entered a new age of darkness, devastation, and death.

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HideousGrain
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This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it. Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3 The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not. 1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that] It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple. I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that. If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey. 2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional… Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right? Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured. 3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot. 4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger. 5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic. 6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting. I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3 Thanks for reading the review <3

MadHatter0_o
MadHatter0_oLv3

This is less of a review, more of a first impression as I have read 20+ chapters while writing it. So my opinion might be incomplete. I apologize if something like that happens and would like others to correct me. I would like to start by thanking the author for his hard work and for such an amazing story. It has been quite a long time since I have read a web/light novel with a grounded and realistic MC as well as a well-built world setting. The story started with brief background information on how it all started and necessary information about different levels. It was a nice touch and magnificently done. I liked the temperament of MC. He is intelligent yet has the thought process of 13 years old. He is responsible but doesn't give the feeling of an old man in a young boy's body. His reaction to gaining his sight back, his way to deal with money, or his reaction to his current situation is all realistic, at least as realistic as it can be in a fantasy world. He is not like a typical LN/WN MC who thinks "I am gonna murder this guy's three-generation because he disrespected me by making fun of me" not is he a pushover. He handled his situation like a mature person with a hint of teenage flair (talking about that Middle-finger scene). Overall he is a pretty likable character. The magic system seems pretty simple and easy to follow. I don't have to check again and again which level is after what. The world setting is good so far, not too confusing. The pacing of the story is good so far. It is not going too slow or too fast. But I think there is some space to improve regarding these topics. So far I have talked about the good things of the story. Now let's talk about the things that can be improved. First thing, Proofreading. The story is mostly well written. But there are quite a few mistakes in grammar and sentence making that could have been avoided with a more round of checking. The number and frequency are not that high but still, it hinders the immersion. Next, supporting character development. If first 22 chapter is any indication, I think the author should spend a bit more time developing supporting/minor characters. We have only 1 noticeable supporting character till chapter 23 and it's Greg. He is hinted to be a main supporting cast and good friend of MC. But do we know anything about him other than he is rich and talented? We don't know anything about Greg as a person or feel connected to him. If it is solved in the latter part of the story then it's ok. However, I think it should have been much sooner. The world-building and background description are also much to be desired. For example, it helps the readers to visualize if you give a brief description of the Room MC is living in or the market and its shops when he went out shopping. Maybe a bit more description about people and environment when he went out for the first time after his sight was back. this would have helped us feel connected to the MC more. This part is some selfish request as a reader. Please keep the MC realistic and relatable like this. Don't make him like a thousand other MC whose improvement doesn't follow any logic or common sense. I am still miffed about that 120 points in the practical exam. MC has been blind and malnourished throughout his all life. Moreover, He doesn't exercise or haven't practiced the practical part at all. Suddenly 5 days after getting his sight back, He is using martial arts routine accurately and smoothly. And in these 5 days, he had to gather mana for the exam, learn how to read and write, prepare for the theoretical part of the exam and go out sightseeing. It is almost physically impossible for him to do this properly, no matter how easy the routine was. The craziest part is he got more points than Greg who is practicing longer than MC, has better development, and seems like a genius in martial arts. Please don't do things like this. Don't throw logic out of the window to bring sudden growth to MC or sudden character development. Please introduce a romantic interest but not a harem please. we have more than enough harem plot on this site. what we are lacking is a meaningful, non-harem romance. Please fill that void.

Anirudh7
Anirudh7Lv4

From the start to the recent chapters the story has flowed quite well with no jarring plots, its been written brilliantly, the world building has been done well as well but has to have a qualitative upgrade once more worlds are introduced, the human cultivation system while it might draw in readers because of the new beast system but is actually quite limiting, with barely the good soul world bearers having a chance at a high level and the rest having to accept mediocrity, body refining cultivation has now been introduced which is a good start already and with the mc being of a stronger race im guessing he'll also cultivate with that races system and bloodline which again would be a stronger system, when his bloodline awakens i hope the bloodline itself grants him a way to cultivate the way the celestia race does atleast For a book which the author says will only have about 1000 chapters we're alraedy almost 30% through with only about a year gone and no actual personality change in the mc, but just teenage growth, if the mc doesnt change much this story will somehow end up with an mc with a teenagers personality, no special personalities like being a sadist, womanizer, cold, evil,lazy, chilled out,and the chaotic good ones etc What we have is a person who nice and at best hot blooded for battle which is too basic for an mc hes basically got aside characters personality THe side charactets dont pose much attachment and are disposable in the sense the mc will leave them behind, hopefully that changes when he reaches a stronger race and makes friends Completing this story in 700 chapters kinda feels jarring, i expect multiple time skips to achieve that which i dont want to see in quick succesion, hopefully the author decides to keep taking it at a slow pace and extend the novel to about 1500 chapters atleast THe time flow needs a revamp, with the soul powers issue dealt with, and body refining being a long term thing, we dont need a day to day story, time can flow faster, if i ignore everything and just look at how at almost 300 chapters we've only had almost 1 year passing i must say its one of the world time passage sequences written, with there being no reason to have the mc start growing to the top in just a few years, and with him potentially having a long life span, the time definitely has to flow faster In essence except these minor issues to be dealt with the story itself is quite nice and has good potential the only thing to avoid i guess is an over fixation on the human race and making it reach the top, too many books have done that, and frankly books that dont focus on races to take up and focus on the mc and his companions and stuff as people more have a better plot

its_L
its_LLv3

180+ chapters in and here is my review starting with mc who is extremely stupid sometimes arrogant and sometimes he thinks everything should be according to his will and he is also somewhat ungrateful . even though author emphasized many time that I lost count that he is mature in the story believe me he is not and if u say that he is only 14 yrs old and he has to be naive than stop calling him mature every other chapter bcz the life he had led should have made our mc mature but it only made him stupid. even though the mc has determination and he is hard-working I really dislike his thought process in many situations be it regarding his second soul bond be it regarding the time he had to endure pain while creating sub space or be it while taking others advice which he never takes bcz he is smart than others I guess this is what he thinks it looks like that to me don't know about others but yeah his thought process makes me think of him not as mc but your typical young masters. the only thing mc ever did not so stupid would be choosing artemis and i like that owl 🦉 more than mc. the way the MC character s developing I really don't know what it will be like and I don't think it will be any good the mc had already pushed me to edge an d if it keeps going on like this I will really drop this book. and yeah revenge is not something our mc thinks about its not like he has strength to do that and it's ok not to think about it untill he gets strong. well other than mc the everything in this novel is pretty good be it world backgroud or story or cultivation system and all. that's all for my review 🙂

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