From the start to the recent chapters the story has flowed quite well with no jarring plots, its been written brilliantly, the world building has been done well as well but has to have a qualitative upgrade once more worlds are introduced, the human cultivation system while it might draw in readers because of the new beast system but is actually quite limiting, with barely the good soul world bearers having a chance at a high level and the rest having to accept mediocrity, body refining cultivation has now been introduced which is a good start already and with the mc being of a stronger race im guessing he'll also cultivate with that races system and bloodline which again would be a stronger system, when his bloodline awakens i hope the bloodline itself grants him a way to cultivate the way the celestia race does atleast For a book which the author says will only have about 1000 chapters we're alraedy almost 30% through with only about a year gone and no actual personality change in the mc, but just teenage growth, if the mc doesnt change much this story will somehow end up with an mc with a teenagers personality, no special personalities like being a sadist, womanizer, cold, evil,lazy, chilled out,and the chaotic good ones etc What we have is a person who nice and at best hot blooded for battle which is too basic for an mc hes basically got aside characters personality THe side charactets dont pose much attachment and are disposable in the sense the mc will leave them behind, hopefully that changes when he reaches a stronger race and makes friends Completing this story in 700 chapters kinda feels jarring, i expect multiple time skips to achieve that which i dont want to see in quick succesion, hopefully the author decides to keep taking it at a slow pace and extend the novel to about 1500 chapters atleast THe time flow needs a revamp, with the soul powers issue dealt with, and body refining being a long term thing, we dont need a day to day story, time can flow faster, if i ignore everything and just look at how at almost 300 chapters we've only had almost 1 year passing i must say its one of the world time passage sequences written, with there being no reason to have the mc start growing to the top in just a few years, and with him potentially having a long life span, the time definitely has to flow faster In essence except these minor issues to be dealt with the story itself is quite nice and has good potential the only thing to avoid i guess is an over fixation on the human race and making it reach the top, too many books have done that, and frankly books that dont focus on races to take up and focus on the mc and his companions and stuff as people more have a better plot
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Thanks for your review. I really liked reading it and I can tell what you want to say. About the 1000 chapter limitation, that was just said because I didn't expect the story to go so well, considering that I have a slower pace than most other novels on this website. That being said, I want to write a longer novel too. Other than that, I know that I the mc's personality has to change a little bit, but that will come with time(which will flow faster and not stay as a 'day by day' story) :3
I'm sure u will pull it off id just say that taking the mc as an example who suffered and survived during childhood, now to play catch up hes working extremely hard, hes atleast about to do 2 of the jobs serously as well, he also has a teenager naive personality for now, its very difficult to break from this mold of good person who loves battles, but i atleast would love to see a realistic situation where when the mc does reach the low lique stage he burns out and doesnt rush anymore, takes a laid back stance as he feels hes had enough hectic years, and progresses at a stable pace while exploring and stuff, this will inturn give a growth perspective which hasnt really been done, with most stories keeping a good or evil mc and not a realistic volatile situation(just an example lol) Best of luck with the novel I sure hope it goes on for a good 1800 chapters or so 😛
HideousGrain:Thanks for your review. I really liked reading it and I can tell what you want to say. About the 1000 chapter limitation, that was just said because I didn't expect the story to go so well, considering that I have a slower pace than most other novels on this website. That being said, I want to write a longer novel too. Other than that, I know that I the mc's personality has to change a little bit, but that will come with time(which will flow faster and not stay as a 'day by day' story) :3
I personally like the mc's character I mean he is naive sometimes like taking risks such as telling others his secrets or babelling them unknowingly or not knowing his own strength sometimes and trying to interfere in higher level fights but he also acts clever at times making business deals and not jumping in directly being cautious and not always relying on his eyes which he learned hard way it's nice to change the character a bit I just hope it's not too drastic and also I like how mc wants to be self sufficient but he is being getting help one after another first flers then his class teacher then Dalia and Shane im not saying it's a bad thing but it just seems too coincidental
In a recent chapter i actually wrote a similar comment on how all these things mc does are what a typical kid with no rigid upbringing would do at his age, and it took me around 350 chapters to get that, as we've gotten too used to reincarnated mcs who have a personality and just build on it, rather than a blank canvas But a blank canvas can only be used for childhood, thats what makes it special, thats what makes this mc special, how we see his personality being so organic and growing in such an organic manner rather than us being told that this is your mc and hes already this person, which is great At the same time the mc has to get defining traits to his personality when we get to an adult phase, not maturity, hes not getting married and having kids or taking responsibility for the whole race, but as he grows he has to have a unique personality with defining characteristics to keep going with the organic character growth which we have so far and which makes this story great. The mc has to have the potential choice of having an extreme personality be it destructive,casanova like etc, or calmer and monologueish where he calculates situations in his brain, rather than limiting him to a nice guy, thats what will make this story great. I agree with u, but only on the childhood phase, the adult phase has to have the above mentioned points to a certain degree at least for me 🤷♂️
Roy_Mascarenhas:I personally like the mc's character I mean he is naive sometimes like taking risks such as telling others his secrets or babelling them unknowingly or not knowing his own strength sometimes and trying to interfere in higher level fights but he also acts clever at times making business deals and not jumping in directly being cautious and not always relying on his eyes which he learned hard way it's nice to change the character a bit I just hope it's not too drastic and also I like how mc wants to be self sufficient but he is being getting help one after another first flers then his class teacher then Dalia and Shane im not saying it's a bad thing but it just seems too coincidental
good book
MTL?
Beautiful
does mc ever get strong
