Edge Of The Book: Castle Siege

I must say, I love you brought all the different elements together. There's harmony in everything. Your synopsis made me want to know what's gonna happen to Lux. You took great consideration in blending everything so good job on that. I will be keeping an eye on Lux's journey and will be rooting for him.

The updates are consistent, the story development is good, and the world background is nice. I think the characters are interesting but they could use some more expansion on how they look and what their motives are. The writing is mainly good but I see tense shifts and minor grammar errors in this story. Please keep working on your product to sharpen it up because it has the potential to be elite. Feel free to read my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

First of all, the story got me hooked right from the very first paragraph. It was a good way to catch the readers’ attention. I also like how the story is progressing so far. Next up is the stability of your updates. I can see that you are determined to write this story, which is very admirable. The progress and plot are good as of now, but please do keep in mind one thing - maybe stay consistent with one tense? It was in present, then past all of a sudden, and that fact alone confuse me just a little. Overall, please keep up with the good work :). It may not be much, but I’m cheering for you with a power stone ☺️

A synopsis is just as important as the rest of the story .And the author here did not waver in making both to be captivating. I'm a huge fan of adventure stories so for anyone seeing this review . .. Give this book a shot, you won't be disappointed 🔥 🔥 🔥

Complex good writing detailed good synopsis and cover I enjoyed it Good book to be desired or approved of. "a good quality of life" 2. having the qualities required for a particular role. "the schools here are good Just needed more words but now u know the def of good

Wonderful story line, I like the background and setting of the story it is really creative and the first chapter is so dramatic it was captivating.

Okay let me start by saying,I loved the synopsis and love fantasy novels, this book took me by surprise I wasn't expecting anything like this . This is amazing and it's amazing how this Author thought so much of writing this down, I found myself reading this book more than , I thought ......

I love what's going on. The intense adventure and storyline, it's really good. I'm not that far in the lecture but i'm liking it. The author is a good writer by the way. [img=recommend]

I mean who doesn't love magic!!! The author's narration is superb and i could almost visualize it. The main lead is strong and lovable and it's amazing. Keep up the good work and more chapters please.

I'm detecting a good story here, and one that doesn't involve the common transmigration or isekai trope nor harem. (Thank goodness!) There is nothing else I can add, more than keep doing such good work!

Extremely good story. I think I like most how you describe everything. The language is good. The world is well built. The characters are believable. Good work author.

It is amazing story Author, i really like this book. Your idea is very unique because you mix magic with adventure.. Lux's adventure for found his sister.. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

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This is a great story...the prologue gave an intense vibe, as you expect from a war... I actually mistaked it for modern war with guns but the picture hot clearer in my mind... the writing quality is good... I can understand what I'm reading and so far following Lux and Roy's perspectives were not challenge... I appreciate the world background, it intrigued me as it was dished out during history class... i was left wondering more.. the flow is a little dragged at some parts in my opinion but overall I can't complain... Fantastic story author!😁

The beginning is pretty good, A very well written novel. Has a great pacing, the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Keep it up.

It's a great story! The story and the characters gives an impact and good satisfaction to the readers. By reading this makes me feel excited for the next chapters. Hoping for the success of this story 😊 Keep it up 😊 love love ❤️

The book has a new, interesting take, worlds intertwining, and I like it. Main characters have personalities that are likeable, and I feel like I can support them. The author had a good idea and did their best to bring it to life. I have to complain about the writing quality, because although the author has a good vocabulary, they lack in the grammatical and punctuation field. Story development is good and I ask the author to keep it up, the world background is also good, but expanding a bit won't hurt. (I am saying this out of a personal bias, I like world building, so I don't say that it's bad, I just want more of it XD). That's it. Do your best, Author!

It's a great new way of writing! I love to read books like journals and the main story of the wars of the other world is incredible! And perfectly combined with the real world of the main character. Love it!

The plot was hard to grasp at first, but as the story progressed, it became easier to understand. The story itself is really good and it's setting itself up to be something great, but there needs to be some proof reading and editing done. Other than those small gripes, this story is shaping up to be something good