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HANA_4345
HANA_4345Lv32yr
2021-12-31 15:09

I'm detecting a good story here, and one that doesn't involve the common transmigration or isekai trope nor harem. (Thank goodness!) There is nothing else I can add, more than keep doing such good work!

Edge Of The Book: Castle Siege

SJCTheLegacy
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167 Chs

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Ice_Princesss
Ice_PrincesssLv4

I must say, I love you brought all the different elements together. There's harmony in everything. Your synopsis made me want to know what's gonna happen to Lux. You took great consideration in blending everything so good job on that. I will be keeping an eye on Lux's journey and will be rooting for him.

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Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117Lv1

The updates are consistent, the story development is good, and the world background is nice. I think the characters are interesting but they could use some more expansion on how they look and what their motives are. The writing is mainly good but I see tense shifts and minor grammar errors in this story. Please keep working on your product to sharpen it up because it has the potential to be elite. Feel free to read my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

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LucienNg
LucienNgLv1

First of all, the story got me hooked right from the very first paragraph. It was a good way to catch the readers’ attention. I also like how the story is progressing so far. Next up is the stability of your updates. I can see that you are determined to write this story, which is very admirable. The progress and plot are good as of now, but please do keep in mind one thing - maybe stay consistent with one tense? It was in present, then past all of a sudden, and that fact alone confuse me just a little. Overall, please keep up with the good work :). It may not be much, but I’m cheering for you with a power stone ☺️

2yr
Arkbrave
ArkbraveLv2

A synopsis is just as important as the rest of the story .And the author here did not waver in making both to be captivating. I'm a huge fan of adventure stories so for anyone seeing this review . .. Give this book a shot, you won't be disappointed 🔥 🔥 🔥

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LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11

Complex good writing detailed good synopsis and cover I enjoyed it Good book to be desired or approved of. "a good quality of life" 2. having the qualities required for a particular role. "the schools here are good Just needed more words but now u know the def of good

2yr
Obliviousstudent
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Wonderful story line, I like the background and setting of the story it is really creative and the first chapter is so dramatic it was captivating.

2yr
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11

Okay let me start by saying,I loved the synopsis and love fantasy novels, this book took me by surprise I wasn't expecting anything like this . This is amazing and it's amazing how this Author thought so much of writing this down, I found myself reading this book more than , I thought ......

2yr
OneClaudia
OneClaudiaLv2

I love what's going on. The intense adventure and storyline, it's really good. I'm not that far in the lecture but i'm liking it. The author is a good writer by the way. [img=recommend]

2yr
Precious_Onwe
Precious_OnweLv3

I mean who doesn't love magic!!! The author's narration is superb and i could almost visualize it. The main lead is strong and lovable and it's amazing. Keep up the good work and more chapters please.

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