Item: Edge Of The Book: Castle Siege
Rating: 4.8
Author: LucienNg

LucienNgLv12yr

2022-01-20 21:52

First of all, the story got me hooked right from the very first paragraph. It was a good way to catch the readers’ attention. I also like how the story is progressing so far. Next up is the stability of your updates. I can see that you are determined to write this story, which is very admirable. The progress and plot are good as of now, but please do keep in mind one thing - maybe stay consistent with one tense? It was in present, then past all of a sudden, and that fact alone confuse me just a little. Overall, please keep up with the good work :). It may not be much, but I’m cheering for you with a power stone ☺️

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