HANA_4345

I won't say it's my best writing since it's my first story, but I do hope you could give it a chance. You can be honest commenting if there's anything not of your liking. It will help me to improve my writing style.😄

So... not exactly a review, but a post to give you some sort of an idea of what the characters in the story looks like... by the way have fun reading you all!!!! (btw, not giving myself a 5 star rating since I know there is room for improvement)

Poor Lynn is so average that maybe if he commits a crime no one would be able to describe his features because of how average he is.😆

Not saying that people won't read it, but like you said, as what happens with all sequels, people will compare. That's what I meant with a big shoe to fill.

So the writing is overall great. What are my worries for the author though... Everyone knows a bit of what Avatar is about (even those who are not fan knows the main idea of the story). So you do have a big pair of shoes to fill. As for how the story is going, the pace is good. There are no unnecessary info. I don't really read fan-fic, but from the chapters I read, I can do a good bet that this is a very well-written fan-fic, it's on par to the OG stories here.

hahaha... you've got a good eye. I'm still experimenting with writing style... thank you for giving it a read even though is not your cup of tea :) have a great day/night!

She really do have all the reasons to burn those people alive! Not one ounce of remorse.