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Divine_universLv158mth
2024-06-04 19:10

honestly decent writing, if your not very good with cruelty to yourself, depression and hate abuse this story isn't for you, i myself am not in a great mental state and tried reading this and the extreme amounts of cruelty from people around him and his cruelty to his self just turned me off from the story cause of how extreme it is. not to mention 90+ chapters in and all these people hate him and for 95% of them you don't even actually know why. author will probably get to it eventually but i don't have the patience or mental energy to read to that point. good writing cause of the amount of emotion it makes you feel but besides that the story itself just runs a bit to slow for me and the premise of it is just a turn off

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