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Utkarsh_Saharkar
Utkarsh_SaharkarLv45mth
2024-06-22 03:22

I don't know what to say. depressing mc just saying that he deserves to dire. confusing plot, just getting pain and hate by others with his own will. I don't want to read it anymore . Some people are saying that it's good, perfect but I don't feel like that. Harem tag but just pushing girls away from it and instead of starting again he is just stuck with his girlfriend like bro we know it hits hard but you have just given up in life. if you want to die alone just suicide again, you don't even want to use the new opportunity.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Noob6_writer9
4.4
263 Chs

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Jacky_Donnie
Jacky_DonnieLv2

same Bro. MC isn't utilizing his brain completely. And the Reincarnated part isn't there anymore bcz MC isn't Inder but that Brainless child

4mth
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Klashdix
KlashdixLv4

1- If he wanted to die, he would have died, but if u paid attention to the novel, u would understand that this isn't the case 2-seems like a skill issue if u didn't understand the plot when so many other readers did tbh🤷‍♂️ 3-idk what u are yapping about the girls thing and moving on, u definitely missed the plot or u just read some other novel completely, what he is doing is literally to save everyone around him, but oh well, people like u read the beginning of a novel and then just make their own fan canon about the novel and get mad💀

3mth
3
Utkarsh_Saharkar
Utkarsh_SaharkarLv4

happy reading this story for you. it might be your taste but not mine. i don't think taking others beating in yourself is logical the MC can use the brain and avoid such things. i don't like this story and that's my opinion which I posted I am not telling others to don't read. Also I admit I don't have the skill to read it which is good for me. Iam here to read some simple novels and fanfics and I don't want to read a very complex story which is also my choice so good luck and happy reading

Klashdix:1- If he wanted to die, he would have died, but if u paid attention to the novel, u would understand that this isn't the case 2-seems like a skill issue if u didn't understand the plot when so many other readers did tbh🤷‍♂️ 3-idk what u are yapping about the girls thing and moving on, u definitely missed the plot or u just read some other novel completely, what he is doing is literally to save everyone around him, but oh well, people like u read the beginning of a novel and then just make their own fan canon about the novel and get mad💀
3mth
5
Klashdix
KlashdixLv4

sure ig, i mean if u want to go read simple ntr and 18+ novels, go on and have fun👍

Utkarsh_Saharkar:happy reading this story for you. it might be your taste but not mine. i don't think taking others beating in yourself is logical the MC can use the brain and avoid such things. i don't like this story and that's my opinion which I posted I am not telling others to don't read. Also I admit I don't have the skill to read it which is good for me. Iam here to read some simple novels and fanfics and I don't want to read a very complex story which is also my choice so good luck and happy reading
3mth
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

Super toxica y ardida jaja

Klashdix:sure ig, i mean if u want to go read simple ntr and 18+ novels, go on and have fun👍
2mth
6
sennun
sennunLv13

you in here replying to all the comments on behalf of the author is so crazy, and the funny thing is your acting like this story is wholesome or somesht it's literally a harem 18+ novel.

Klashdix:sure ig, i mean if u want to go read simple ntr and 18+ novels, go on and have fun👍
1mth
12
Lucyn
LucynLv1

brother and the author

sennun:you in here replying to all the comments on behalf of the author is so crazy, and the funny thing is your acting like this story is wholesome or somesht it's literally a harem 18+ novel.
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Other Reviews
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.

8mth

Blessed_one
Blessed_oneLv3

i don't what to say about this novel, in first few chapter's i thought it's interesting but after that i think, this novel is f*cked up, author writing skills is good, but this novel 🤡. (sorry if this hurts anyone)

6mth
Sebimon
SebimonLv14

It’s from the same author of SOA, so you can expect a masterpiece. I only hope that the schedule of both novels don’t get affected.

8mth
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

the synopsis is very interesting but the actual story not so much. it's so convoluted and boring. the author trying to make star crossed lovers kind of story but it actually makes me cringe. it's not good fic but it's not awful either. just boring

7mth
Ximnax
XimnaxLv14

Author how much longer is my boy going to suffer?! Will anybody find out about how he’s treated by his mother or the choices he’s forced to make? I NEED ANSWERS

7mth
Kagio
KagioLv3

Reading till the end of the free chapters i am not happy with the pace and story so far. mc is weak af, everyone hates him and he still is not in the training phase. for 40+ chapters it just feels like a prolouge and i have to say it, i just wasted my time in hope that the mc does something good. the are 10+ characters and everyone hates him. he does nothing to correct it. he just gets beating up. no romance and mc is so bad and game focused that he ihnores anything. honestly its too mich of a waste to wait for the plot to have a good moment about mc. everything is negative, he get broken bones every 5 chapters. people trash talk him every 2 chapters. bro why did i even hope that the author will put something good here?

3mth
Ali_Ceyhun
Ali_CeyhunLv13

Bro... I have no words. This is masterpiece.

7mth
Kenjihayamura
KenjihayamuraLv11

I haven't thought about writing a review since it's only 1 ch, but I'm pretty sure it's going to be great like Saga Of Atlantis. But author, will the update schedule for new novels be very long?I mean, SOA itself takes quite a long time to update, so............... You know

9mth
DEMONOID_GOD
DEMONOID_GODLv4

It already feels amazing and I don't know what the author have in his big brain for this story. Great start for the story author 😁

9mth
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