Divine_univers

what a G i want to kill is crazy

level 50 soul will with now an even higher chance of getting to a nine pulse 9 star like I know he will at some point

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I'd purchase privilege I'm just broke at the moment :(

tftc

surprisingly pretty good. story flows decently well, characters feel like they have their own personality and it's interesting enough. also love the fact the privilege chapter prices are what they are. as most stories charge 50$ for 25 chapters which are only 1k words. the fact you get 50 for 10 is what i think all privilege prices should be. Keep it up author

guy really is making someone else participate in the duel, it almost feels like Baron Nathan is trying to let the relationship between their houses deteriorate

story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough

part of the reason I stopped reading it, there's a difference between inspiration and quite literally feeling like a copy and paste with very minute differences