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Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author10mth
2024-03-21 15:54

Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Noob6_writer9
4.3
324 Chs

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Ayush_Srivastava_0952
Ayush_Srivastava_0952Lv13

And his fiancée going to leave him or not?

10mth
6
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

No.

Ayush_Srivastava_0952:And his fiancée going to leave him or not?
10mth
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shockfoxx
shockfoxxLv14

is he going to eat his mother?

10mth
4
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

I don't know if this question has a double meaning or not but either way. No, he will not eat his mother.

shockfoxx:is he going to eat his mother?
10mth
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Venerable_Death
Venerable_DeathLv13

Will he be able to use Amun Ra's blessing in the future?

10mth
2
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

He will and will be able to use it a lot earlier than you think.

Venerable_Death:Will he be able to use Amun Ra's blessing in the future?
10mth
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Mr_ZeroDagger07
Mr_ZeroDagger07Lv4

will mc have peace

10mth
3
That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

How many is in the harem?

Noob6_writer9:He will and will be able to use it a lot earlier than you think.
10mth
2
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

He will eventually have peace.

Mr_ZeroDagger07:will mc have peace
10mth
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Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

As of now I can't say much about it.

That_Annoying_guy:How many is in the harem?
10mth
8
Gilly1210
Gilly1210Lv15

As of now it’s dark as heck (love it) but will there be, I don’t know how to put other then raise of sunshine in the darkness?

10mth
4
Gilly1210
Gilly1210Lv15

I meant, will there be light amongst the darkness

Gilly1210:As of now it’s dark as heck (love it) but will there be, I don’t know how to put other then raise of sunshine in the darkness?
10mth
2
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Depends, if you are talking about a person who will shine in his darkness then, yes.

Gilly1210:As of now it’s dark as heck (love it) but will there be, I don’t know how to put other then raise of sunshine in the darkness?
10mth
9
Edhant
EdhantLv4

There will be an Academy like in Saga Of Atlantis?

10mth
3
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Yes

Edhant:There will be an Academy like in Saga Of Atlantis?
10mth
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Daoistkd9C8k
Daoistkd9C8kLv3

i hope the female lead is cold but kind inside also iIwant the mc to be faithful to 1girl only plz also can you make the fL strong plz... iIbeen reading your work and i like some plot really not same drama good job author thats all...work word ❤️❤️

10mth
3
kylo_stekreo
kylo_stekreoLv4

Is there a chance of it getting dropped ?

10mth
1
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

well.... there is a harem tag so there will be multiple female leads. and I assure you all of them are strong and supportive to MC.

Daoistkd9C8k:i hope the female lead is cold but kind inside also iIwant the mc to be faithful to 1girl only plz also can you make the fL strong plz... iIbeen reading your work and i like some plot really not same drama good job author thats all...work word ❤️❤️
10mth
10
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

No.

kylo_stekreo:Is there a chance of it getting dropped ?
10mth
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the_cant_breath
the_cant_breathLv2

dose the story progress fast or slow

10mth
1
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Blessed_one
Blessed_oneLv3

i don't what to say about this novel, in first few chapter's i thought it's interesting but after that i think, this novel is f*cked up, author writing skills is good, but this novel 🤡. (sorry if this hurts anyone)

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Utkarsh_Saharkar
Utkarsh_SaharkarLv4

I don't know what to say. depressing mc just saying that he deserves to dire. confusing plot, just getting pain and hate by others with his own will. I don't want to read it anymore . Some people are saying that it's good, perfect but I don't feel like that. Harem tag but just pushing girls away from it and instead of starting again he is just stuck with his girlfriend like bro we know it hits hard but you have just given up in life. if you want to die alone just suicide again, you don't even want to use the new opportunity.

7mth
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

the synopsis is very interesting but the actual story not so much. it's so convoluted and boring. the author trying to make star crossed lovers kind of story but it actually makes me cringe. it's not good fic but it's not awful either. just boring

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Sebimon
SebimonLv14

It’s from the same author of SOA, so you can expect a masterpiece. I only hope that the schedule of both novels don’t get affected.

11mth
Kagio
KagioLv3

Reading till the end of the free chapters i am not happy with the pace and story so far. mc is weak af, everyone hates him and he still is not in the training phase. for 40+ chapters it just feels like a prolouge and i have to say it, i just wasted my time in hope that the mc does something good. the are 10+ characters and everyone hates him. he does nothing to correct it. he just gets beating up. no romance and mc is so bad and game focused that he ihnores anything. honestly its too mich of a waste to wait for the plot to have a good moment about mc. everything is negative, he get broken bones every 5 chapters. people trash talk him every 2 chapters. bro why did i even hope that the author will put something good here?

5mth
Ximnax
XimnaxLv14

Author how much longer is my boy going to suffer?! Will anybody find out about how he’s treated by his mother or the choices he’s forced to make? I NEED ANSWERS

9mth
Ali_Ceyhun
Ali_CeyhunLv13

Bro... I have no words. This is masterpiece.

10mth
Kenjihayamura
KenjihayamuraLv11

I haven't thought about writing a review since it's only 1 ch, but I'm pretty sure it's going to be great like Saga Of Atlantis. But author, will the update schedule for new novels be very long?I mean, SOA itself takes quite a long time to update, so............... You know

11mth
aceZ0
aceZ0Lv4

I feel like when writing a "tragic" story like this wn you need a few special things. A plot that makes sense and can properly explain why all the world is like that. And a mc who either goes to the dark edgy path and tries to stay away from the cast or an mc who actively tries to do the right thing in a wrong broken world. This novel's mc is somewhere along the middle of that and so far he's pretty unlikeable, emotional but stays away from his past relationships, knows about the future yet keeps doing things that are contrary to his safety and his goals. So here we have a half-baked mc who I can't stand reading, the world has also been largely unexplained with little intrigue and mystery. Most info is just dumped to u with little to no explanation.

9mth
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