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Noob6_writer9Author11mth
2024-03-21 07:54

Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.

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Ayush_Srivastava_0952Lv13

And his fiancée going to leave him or not?

Noob6_writer9Author

No.

Ayush_Srivastava_0952:And his fiancée going to leave him or not?
shockfoxxLv14

is he going to eat his mother?

Noob6_writer9Author

I don't know if this question has a double meaning or not but either way. No, he will not eat his mother.

shockfoxx:is he going to eat his mother?
Venerable_DeathLv13

Will he be able to use Amun Ra's blessing in the future?

Noob6_writer9Author

He will and will be able to use it a lot earlier than you think.

Venerable_Death:Will he be able to use Amun Ra's blessing in the future?
Mr_ZeroDagger07Lv4

will mc have peace

That_Annoying_guyLv4

How many is in the harem?

Noob6_writer9:He will and will be able to use it a lot earlier than you think.
Noob6_writer9Author

He will eventually have peace.

Mr_ZeroDagger07:will mc have peace
Noob6_writer9Author

As of now I can't say much about it.

That_Annoying_guy:How many is in the harem?
Gilly1210Lv15

As of now it’s dark as heck (love it) but will there be, I don’t know how to put other then raise of sunshine in the darkness?

Gilly1210Lv15

I meant, will there be light amongst the darkness

Gilly1210:As of now it’s dark as heck (love it) but will there be, I don’t know how to put other then raise of sunshine in the darkness?
Noob6_writer9Author

Depends, if you are talking about a person who will shine in his darkness then, yes.

Gilly1210:As of now it’s dark as heck (love it) but will there be, I don’t know how to put other then raise of sunshine in the darkness?
EdhantLv4

There will be an Academy like in Saga Of Atlantis?

Noob6_writer9Author

Yes

Edhant:There will be an Academy like in Saga Of Atlantis?
Daoistkd9C8kLv3

i hope the female lead is cold but kind inside also iIwant the mc to be faithful to 1girl only plz also can you make the fL strong plz... iIbeen reading your work and i like some plot really not same drama good job author thats all...work word ❤️❤️

kylo_stekreoLv4

Is there a chance of it getting dropped ?

Noob6_writer9Author

well.... there is a harem tag so there will be multiple female leads. and I assure you all of them are strong and supportive to MC.

Daoistkd9C8k:i hope the female lead is cold but kind inside also iIwant the mc to be faithful to 1girl only plz also can you make the fL strong plz... iIbeen reading your work and i like some plot really not same drama good job author thats all...work word ❤️❤️
Noob6_writer9Author

No.

kylo_stekreo:Is there a chance of it getting dropped ?
the_cant_breathLv2

dose the story progress fast or slow

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