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2024-03-27 21:14

the synopsis is very interesting but the actual story not so much. it's so convoluted and boring. the author trying to make star crossed lovers kind of story but it actually makes me cringe. it's not good fic but it's not awful either. just boring

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Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

welp, I hope you find a story of your liking then, that isn't 'boring'.

Bk_Vybez
Bk_VybezLv3

what's boring about if??take your own time and cook for author cuz I'm enjoying you novel

Klashdix
KlashdixLv12

If just instead of saying "the story is boring πŸ€“" and you could write down actually reasons and examples about what part or parts of the story u found boring and explain ur opinion, i might had taken this review a bit more serious πŸ’€

Dark_lightning_Dao
Dark_lightning_DaoLv2

yo relax, its just someones opinion u getting heated just makes u out to be someone sort of obsessive defender tryna bring others opinion down cause u dont like them or they dont like the story

Klashdix:If just instead of saying "the story is boring πŸ€“" and you could write down actually reasons and examples about what part or parts of the story u found boring and explain ur opinion, i might had taken this review a bit more serious πŸ’€
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

yeah bro take author's even deeper

Klashdix:If just instead of saying "the story is boring πŸ€“" and you could write down actually reasons and examples about what part or parts of the story u found boring and explain ur opinion, i might had taken this review a bit more serious πŸ’€
Andetto
AndettoLv11

Nice selfie πŸ‘

Enlightened_Clown:yeah bro take author's even deeper
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Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

He made good points tho , not being able to see that makes you .... well you are an enlightened clown so can you still be called a clown?

Enlightened_Clown:yeah bro take author's even deeper
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Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

If your life's really a b1tch that it forces you to put your nose in other's people's business without reading the whole damn thread then you should just off yourself.

Life_sa_Beach_:He made good points tho , not being able to see that makes you .... well you are an enlightened clown so can you still be called a clown?
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

I read it and that's what makes it even more funny Mr clown .... the review had nothing to add to it other than calling it boring , instead of clarifying anything , and you Mr clown were going off on someone's genuine comment about the review having nothing to add to it I want to off myself but I am afraid of pain .... or I would just done it sooner

Enlightened_Clown:If your life's really a b1tch that it forces you to put your nose in other's people's business without reading the whole damn thread then you should just off yourself.
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

You say the guy is taking the authors "d" deeper when he just said a genuine comment while you were being a Lil b, and the fact that you got triggered only makes the point more true. I double checked the thread to make sure I didn't miss anything and sure enough you were just being a Lil b to a guy saying the review should have had more substance

Enlightened_Clown:If your life's really a b1tch that it forces you to put your nose in other's people's business without reading the whole damn thread then you should just off yourself.
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

lmao it's an online comment section πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ what do you mean other people's business 🦭

Enlightened_Clown:If your life's really a b1tch that it forces you to put your nose in other's people's business without reading the whole damn thread then you should just off yourself.
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

The fact that you replied my single comment with three and then say that I am the one that got triggered. Sure bro πŸ‘

Life_sa_Beach_:You say the guy is taking the authors "d" deeper when he just said a genuine comment while you were being a Lil b, and the fact that you got triggered only makes the point more true. I double checked the thread to make sure I didn't miss anything and sure enough you were just being a Lil b to a guy saying the review should have had more substance
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

😣 when your comment doesn't make any sense , you have to redirect it. It's all right mr clown

Enlightened_Clown:The fact that you replied my single comment with three and then say that I am the one that got triggered. Sure bro πŸ‘
Ace_Boogie_2208
Ace_Boogie_2208Lv4

Don't be snippy because your book is shit. Next time, write a character that isn't such a wimpy pushover.

Noob6_writer9:welp, I hope you find a story of your liking then, that isn't 'boring'.
Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Sure, random guy from the internet.

Ace_Boogie_2208:Don't be snippy because your book is shit. Next time, write a character that isn't such a wimpy pushover.
Yanderes_Lover
Yanderes_LoverLv4

when stupid people without brains give their opinions

Ace_Boogie_2208:Don't be snippy because your book is shit. Next time, write a character that isn't such a wimpy pushover.
089_Dalmatia
089_DalmatiaLv3

Bruh, you liked that story?

Yanderes_Lover:when stupid people without brains give their opinions
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Yanderes_Lover
Yanderes_LoverLv4

Nah I like my Esmeary more

089_Dalmatia:Bruh, you liked that story?
089_Dalmatia
089_DalmatiaLv3

ah haa character ato ei posondo

Yanderes_Lover:Nah I like my Esmeary more
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