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Blessed_one
Blessed_oneLv311mth
2024-05-22 21:26

i don't what to say about this novel, in first few chapter's i thought it's interesting but after that i think, this novel is f*cked up, author writing skills is good, but this novel 🤡. (sorry if this hurts anyone)

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Klashdix
KlashdixLv12

what hurts more is seeing a dude not having the capability to point out what dissatisfied him in novel, and give reasons and reasoning behind his claims. Seems using ur brain has become rare this days.

BridgeToHeavens
BridgeToHeavensLv4

Hi i think he’s disappointed cuz other character than mc in this novel is better main character and more liked by public, which is like death bed for story

Klashdix:what hurts more is seeing a dude not having the capability to point out what dissatisfied him in novel, and give reasons and reasoning behind his claims. Seems using ur brain has become rare this days.
smokingdao
smokingdaoLv3

prob written by a woman

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Klashdix
KlashdixLv12

sorry for the late reply, but honestly, the only person who is more liked is Oliver, who is literally a fan favorite character. Anyone else is objectively wrong

BridgeToHeavens:Hi i think he’s disappointed cuz other character than mc in this novel is better main character and more liked by public, which is like death bed for story
Klashdix
KlashdixLv12

Buddy, if u want to read a novel about mc just being the strongest and getting all the females like pokemons, go read a Chinese or solo leveling copy novel, Just because a story has actual plot doesn't mean it is written by a woman💀

smokingdao:prob written by a woman
BridgeToHeavens
BridgeToHeavensLv4

Its hard to appeal to everyone

Klashdix:sorry for the late reply, but honestly, the only person who is more liked is Oliver, who is literally a fan favorite character. Anyone else is objectively wrong
Blessed_one
Blessed_oneLv3

It's just a single person trying so hard to explain that it's his or her favourite novel, nothing more. I respect that you like it, but just because you like it doesn't mean that everyone has to like it.

pegasus_z0
pegasus_z0Lv11

what was said

smokingdao:prob written by a woman
RutherFoamFord
RutherFoamFordLv1

lol no… is it wrong wanting to read a story, that has an MC with self respect?!?

Klashdix:Buddy, if u want to read a novel about mc just being the strongest and getting all the females like pokemons, go read a Chinese or solo leveling copy novel, Just because a story has actual plot doesn't mean it is written by a woman💀
The_Ends_Of_Days
The_Ends_Of_DaysLv4

yo man tell me the mother gets tortured in the worst way possible, currently in chapter 31 and honestly I can't continue reading this shit.

RutherFoamFord:lol no… is it wrong wanting to read a story, that has an MC with self respect?!?
Krishna_S_Das
Krishna_S_DasLv1

The story is good and interesting to read

Bisker_Islam
Bisker_IslamLv3

The hero does not need to be stronger, he just needs to be smart. Honestly, why doesn't the writer read some of Dostoyevsky's books or Nietzsche's books or any filth? The important thing is that he understands human nature instead of a beta hero.

Klashdix:Buddy, if u want to read a novel about mc just being the strongest and getting all the females like pokemons, go read a Chinese or solo leveling copy novel, Just because a story has actual plot doesn't mean it is written by a woman💀
vainINheaven
vainINheavenLv13

The author mentioned there will be more than five female leads, so I’m confused. Is this a story where the girls fall for him without reason and stay loyal just because he’s strong or helped them in difficult situations? Or does it involve a proper journey with meaningful character development?

Klashdix:Buddy, if u want to read a novel about mc just being the strongest and getting all the females like pokemons, go read a Chinese or solo leveling copy novel, Just because a story has actual plot doesn't mean it is written by a woman💀
Rockey_Sk
Rockey_SkLv3

This novel is absolute, literal ABSOLUTE garbage.

Klashdix:what hurts more is seeing a dude not having the capability to point out what dissatisfied him in novel, and give reasons and reasoning behind his claims. Seems using ur brain has become rare this days.
Isntme
IsntmeLv4

RutherFoamFord:lol no… is it wrong wanting to read a story, that has an MC with self respect?!?
Isntme
IsntmeLv4

vainINheaven:The author mentioned there will be more than five female leads, so I’m confused. Is this a story where the girls fall for him without reason and stay loyal just because he’s strong or helped them in difficult situations? Or does it involve a proper journey with meaningful character development?
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