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Kagio
KagioLv35mth
2024-08-19 08:01

Reading till the end of the free chapters i am not happy with the pace and story so far. mc is weak af, everyone hates him and he still is not in the training phase. for 40+ chapters it just feels like a prolouge and i have to say it, i just wasted my time in hope that the mc does something good. the are 10+ characters and everyone hates him. he does nothing to correct it. he just gets beating up. no romance and mc is so bad and game focused that he ihnores anything. honestly its too mich of a waste to wait for the plot to have a good moment about mc. everything is negative, he get broken bones every 5 chapters. people trash talk him every 2 chapters. bro why did i even hope that the author will put something good here?

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Kagio
KagioLv3

never ever am i gonna give a novel a chance again and just stick to the 20 chaps rule . so thanks author for destroying my limited time and thanks for being one of the reason why i hate trash novels and why i should not look at view count and a good villainess story.

Noob6_writer9
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Welcome.

Kagio:never ever am i gonna give a novel a chance again and just stick to the 20 chaps rule . so thanks author for destroying my limited time and thanks for being one of the reason why i hate trash novels and why i should not look at view count and a good villainess story.
Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

The reason mc never corrects them is because he wants to make them hate her and he believes or he is cursed, if he’s love that person that person dies like when he told 2 person in the past 1 of them died the very same day and when he told his aunt she got executed by his mother thinking she was tryna seduce.

Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

If his mother finds out they cooked

Anime_Sama_8317:The reason mc never corrects them is because he wants to make them hate her and he believes or he is cursed, if he’s love that person that person dies like when he told 2 person in the past 1 of them died the very same day and when he told his aunt she got executed by his mother thinking she was tryna seduce.
onewhodreams
onewhodreamsLv3

yeaaah

Kagio:never ever am i gonna give a novel a chance again and just stick to the 20 chaps rule . so thanks author for destroying my limited time and thanks for being one of the reason why i hate trash novels and why i should not look at view count and a good villainess story.
nazarethothniel
nazarethothnielLv1

Can the blind lead the blind?.. guy this novel is amazing.

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