SeniorTrouble

I would have believed and wished for a speedy recovery if it weren't for this sentence at the beginning of the previous chapter: "Read 20+ Chapter's Ahead in Patreon"

In fact, Delhi is almost, ALMOST, the same as the original work, only with a slightly different MC point of view and slightly different interactions between characters. Chapter 26 becomes completely uninteresting from the first line. I have not read it yet, but I am sure that Hermione will once again show her superiority in mastering magic over MC, as the author has already shown in the chapters before: "Hermione once again performed a new spell first, for which she received points." Overall, her presence is annoying, as is the author's desire to follow canon, even when it completely contradicts the character's personality.

This is not a novel, it is just some kind of retelling of events. If in the first chapter it was good and acceptable for introduction, then in the rest it becomes impossible to read... I got bored already on the 4th chapter. There are no dialogues, plans, thoughts/reflections on behalf of MC. JUST A DRY RETELLING OF EVENTS. Like a history textbook, which can probably be considered more interesting! In the 4th chapter it is told how Ashara teaches MC politics like a child and nothing is said that MC is much older than her and probably understands it much better! Or what!?

Coffee? In the North? Behind the wall? In the Middle Ages!? Fantastic!

How I hate the author. I also hate Superman and Spider-Man for holding back their powers. Now MC too. Although I started hating him during the Killgrave arc... But fanfics aren't written to make readers upset, aggressive and hateful towards everyone, right? (I hope?!)

Such nonsense! The author either did this specifically to get a large number of reviews (angry ones), or to get a large number of reviews with a low rating (I am ready to write, if anything - contact me, author) I don't see any other reasons for writing such nonsense!

Suspiciously many good reviews and not a single bad one... MC is too weak and pathetic that reading about him is disgusting. Also MC does not plan to kill his tormentors, but wants to fuck them...

125 chapters have passed, MC is still passive. He tolerates all the spitting in his face, just like at the very beginning of the work... I still haven't forgotten about the death of Alysanne Targaryen and what Daemon did, which both MC and the author himself have apparently already forgotten...

125 chapters have passed, MC is still passive. He tolerates all the spitting in his face, just like at the very beginning of the work... I still haven't forgotten about the death of Alysanne Targaryen and what Daemon did, which both MC and the author himself have apparently already forgotten...

And that's it? Does the author know what would happen if you rode a horse into a wall at speed, with thousands of horsemen riding behind you? The barrier alone should have destroyed at least a third of the troops!