I was more upset that he was “stunned by what was happening”; I was hoping for less surprise and more control over emotions, but he behaved almost like the original and what’s the difference?

What nonsense. MC is such a pushover. He cannot help but protect his loved ones, it is not normal to take revenge. He didn’t even want to resurrect his mother... She brought up what they call an ungrateful brat... MC had to realize that the Dothraki (and ironborn) are a dead end of human development and we need to get rid of them for the good of the world, starting with our own kalasar! From his kalasar, he could obtain a huge amount of blood essence, which would be enough to gain the power to genocide the Dothraki and resurrect his mother (only); (father can go)…

I'm still hoping for a comment from the author regarding his "iron merchant" gaffe! Why did the fight last so long!? The author weakened the MC!? The MC's abilities from the HP world are essentially reality manipulation! Why didn't mc transfigure the iron suit into the air!? And I hope this is not nonsense like: “he couldn’t” or “he hid his abilities”!

Fidelius!!!!!

I almost liked it. But! Lots of cliffhangers! A lot of unnecessary views from other characters! (And right after the moronic cliffhangers!) A lot of cliches! AND! It’s a very infuriating cliché when a character fights the enemy with all his might and wins in the last attack, but he himself is left without strength and faints! It's horrible! P.S. Everything up to the word BUT is horse shit!

The main problem is palladium poisoning!! And also, the initial models probably had problems with the damage absorption system! Tony wouldn't be able to do anything if a blow from Mjolnir from Thor would turn him into paste inside a tin can!!

Such nonsense. It's so annoying that the MC is pretending to be stupid! He didn’t ask about protection from legimency, or about detectors for potions and poisons in food! OK. But! He did not ask or revoke the Black family's vote in the Wizengamot! Which Malfoy will surely use to his advantage!!

Finally! It was like a breath of fresh air in a pile of crap! Hopefully it won't be too much of a mixture! And I hope it won't be DC! I hate DC! By the way, the MC's wife is the Goddess of Death Hela, so the Marvel world suggests itself!) But I'm afraid there might be a lot of confusion and it will spoil the story... I think we should add worlds with weak lore... Heh, Fast and Furious would be fun and the time frame is almost right) Supernatural ? Magical creatures and stuff may overlap, but there's a confusion of angels, demons and gods... Maybe we could add a little Jurassic World/Park? Kingsman? Jumper 2008? Chronicle 2012? Remember me with Pattinson))))) Next 2007… Bedazzled 2000? Boss level 2021?

Well, yes, everything is quite logical. The author decided to throw away the power of manipulating reality and imposed stupid logic to explain why it is necessary to weaken the MC, because a too strong MC from the start is not always interesting to readers and not all authors have enough talent and creativity to do this in an original and organic way.

I think that if you post one sentence once a week, you can stretch this arc for another year, take note, author!

Is there a full piece on AO3 or ff.net? Or is this an original novel?

I don't like how everyone around the MC behaves like in Chinese cultivation works. I don't like the stupidity of all the characters around MC. Their characters are completely distorted: Clint Barton, Steve Rogers, Tony Stark! Stark would have analyzed what was wrong with MC a long time ago and would have suggested that MC's superpower is the manipulation of probabilities

Very cleverly, from bed to bed so to speak😤

What did you read? There was also a scene about MC and Jean’s nightmares! That MC just woke up from a nightmare and jumped out of bed, and Jean woke up from her nightmare and felt another movement in the bed and got up so as not to wake Scott. It destroyed all my hopes and broke me mentally, I lost all my will to live and desire to read anything. 😭😭

Hahahahahhaha

What the hell is going on?! Everything suddenly became very intense. chaotic! I do not understand anything! In past chapters, the hand told MC that he DON'T NEED any serums!?!?!? What's happening now? Why does he need serums?! And I thought that the revealed divinity was already doing something and functioning somehow, what did that person mean that the MC does not use it!? Why doesn't he use it in this case!?!?

So MC has the power of destruction (obviously :)). Can MC destroy space/time/gravity/death and other concepts!?

What nonsense?! Just a few chapters ago they talked about how bad the attitude of Susan and others towards Harry was and that they would have to try to get Harry to forgive them, and here in this chapter they have a nice conversation, maybe they should have a wedding?!

So that means he just needs to activate his ability on the Ravenclaw tiara next time!! This will improve his intellectual qualities!

Such nonsense! It's not often you see how one chapter can ruin the entire work! I don’t even want to explain the reason, it’s not worth it.