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I believe one of the previous chapters briefly mentioned he had some contact with them.
What especially bugs me about his use of the mystic arts is that it basically renders the "spider" part of his identity irelavent. He just teleports where he needs to go. No need for swinging. Same with tying people up. Why use webs when you can use mystic arts to bind people? Even super strength isn't just spider related when he use super serums and more. I have no clue why he keeps on calling himself spider-man when basically the only things that identify him as such are his suit and spider-sense, and the number of abilities that he has that are NOT spider-man related are huge.
It's better than protaganists who forget about all the people who messed up their lives. The only thing that had me worried before is that he might take revenge to an extreme, like torturing her to death for that matter. Fortunately, his idea actually sounds fitting and would have been decent payback against an arrogant person who is seemingly at the top... if she wasn't in a state were she would probably accept that wholeheartedly for forgiveness regardless đ.
I don't think it's called simping in that case.
I would disagree with you. There is no middle ground on killing a women's children. Either she hates you forever or she didn't like her kids in the first place. If it's the latter, then he did not make her pay at all. If she isn't pained by the loss, then it's not a loss. And to be blunt, you failed to even remotely make her look like it pained her to lose them. At most, she seemed like her pride was hurt a bit, which isn't remotely enough to make things equal between them. Also, you made her too disgusting personality wise for most people to like the MC even being allied with her, let alone that there are too many vibes of her joining his harem later. Aside from trying to use her descendants in political marriage to end things (something I personally despise) and her trashy personality, you even had her considering whether to kill or have her men r*pe the owner of the place they were trespassing on. They are devils. It fits. That doesn't make them likable, nor does it make readers happy to see the MC on their side. Of course, maybe you fixed things later in the story. I stopped reading for a while after the MC started acting like a scumbag due to the temporary personality shift, as I wanted to wait for when that arc ended.
Aren't literally all the ninja descended or related to aliens? So basically, none of the main cast qualify for this, right?
Read a tiny bit of that because of the rediculous name, but couldn't get inro it. What is up with that name anyway!?
We can't even track down who brought invasive species in the modern world with all our technology. I don't think anybody would find out he was the source if he released some baby sea kings,or even just their eggs.
All good! The fact that you gave us an update is already great. Just make sure to let us know if things drag out longer than expected, okay? Always hurts to see an author/translator vanish without a word.
This chapter is one of several reasons I'd be upset if tye translation stopped, regardless of the drop in the originals quality. There are just a few events we have been waiting for so long, that it would be depressing if we never saw them. Confirming his relationship with the two girls, finding (and later, Linwin meeting) Kai'sa's father, and Kai'sa and Powder finally meeting after all that are things I just wouldn't want to miss. Still, massive thanks to the translater for pushing through and even editing to remove the new issues with the story. At most, I've just noticed things dragging a bit longer due to your hard work. Would be awesome if we got someone who knows League lore well to continue the fanfic with original content once things get really bad (or caught up).
This is wrong. You can continue to sleep with a pregnant woman. At worst, you just need to avoid being rough. Why does this misconception keep circling around? It's already been discredited many times.
There are a bunch of reasons, with wish fulfillment only being one. Another is simply that ypu satisfy the preference of a wider range of people. People often get upset when their favorite isn't picked in romance. Personally, I just like romance, and harems generally have much more of it in the story. Authors tend to be trash at writing romance for characters already in a relationships, so settling for a harem, were you can keep writing about new relationships, is easier. It's still better than dragging out the "chase" to hundreds, if not thiusands of chapters just to start dating one girl. Plus threesomes. Unfortunately, readers on WebNovel seem horribly insecure, so you don't find much of that on here.
Uhh. . no, that's not alright. It's outright illegal. Fanfics are legal so long as you don't earn money off them and you add something creative to the overall story (can't copy the story with nothing but a different MC, despite some doing so). Patreon is a grey zone because it's optional, and all the content is eventually available for free. So it can be said that it's just people donating to the author (even if it's not totally true). However, the moment it's locked entirely behind Patreon, and never released for free, it can't even remotely be claimed to be in a grey area. It's just illegal. I highly encourage everyone to report any such patreon and make a DMCA claim against them.
LiES! All unicorns are male! As for how they reproduce? Well, there's a reason they only life maidens.đ
The cute female one, duh!
People tend to forget that Naruto's situation was worse due to the nine tailed fox actually attacking the village. The people there are probably terrified knowing that it's always possible for the nine tailed fox to escape the seal again and attack. He did it once, why not again? Why would they NOT be scared?
I haven't watched more than a couple episodes of Agents of SHIELD, so not sure how much they explained away the event. It's just a bit confusing that he has no reaction to the woman calling him her child, yet acts as if he is doing the right thing with no doubt. It's as if he can't even hear her. If he did, he should at least feel some doubt about his actions, even if he thinks it's the better action. Anyway, it's not super important. It just feels like something is off when reading the chapter.
I don't get it, did they really believe they are doing a good thing by kidnapping kids from their parents? Are they mentally ill? Also, please try to cut out some of the descriptions. I've noticed this as a common problem in novels with ai involved, even when it's just editing. The ai tends to add far too many descriptions like how people are filled with determination (that alone is mentioned too many times in this chapter), or outright stating the emotions or "loyalty" displayed by a character. To put it bluntly, the ai is terrible at "Show, Don't Tell." Instead of saying someone is filled with determination, let their actions do the talking. Instead of saying someone's eyes or mind were filled with fear, show it, such as simply stating the person "trembled." To put things simply, you need to be less explicit, more implicit. Let the readers have some room for their imagination. A person can tremble for many reasons, but you know exactly what they are feeling if you just tell it straight, and that's not good when most of the content is like that.