Quake_Midaro

Take ma stones and break a few Stormcloak legs for me

Ya know... when we gonna see Reyvin do whatever it was he was gonna do for Sybelle woth the ashes he kept? Some sort of resurrection maybe? Ngl kinda miss their interactions Minthara ks awesome but man the Sybelle ordeal still leaves me feeling a bit salty

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Welp I'm out you start begging for reviews in return for more when it's a smut fic nah I'm good these fics get fewer reviews and comments than most for a reason most come here for quick dopamine rush and then leave they're not going to give you reviews constantly especially not if threatened with a stopped fic they'll just move on especially with how aggressive it comes off welp the fic was meh the current plot horrendous the smuts good but outside of that If I were you I'd stick to uust the smut scenes conversation outside of that is awkward forced and feels unnatural your MC is boring AF the women are more or less just the typical pretty yet ran through high school girls which indicates the MC and them aren't exclusive which alot on thos website are gonna turn away from immediately nobody cares for whats more or less NTR let alone actual NTR the fic is a Joke as is if you want 5star reviews and more readers YOU need to IMPROVE and EARN them

Outside of the upload schedule easily a 4/5 fic it's missing a few elemnts imo like slice if life for character development outside if ooh power level go higher but otherwise it's good definitely not a fic you'd read if your looking for a interesting character with outside of a slightly unique Guardian with meta knowledge like it's hard to explain Void feels well like his name Hollow and Bland nothing of interest going on besides him trying to slightly break the plot while ieeping things mostly canon which defeats the purpose of AU and Isekai imo but to each their own this fic has amazing potential and the grammer and structuring is good but it fails at making an Interesting or even slightly relatable MC in otherwords action is good the first berall plot good (it's Destiny plot is good)b ut character intrigue and development is sorely lacking imo

I'm just gonna hop of this fic here good luck with continuong it but since the solidification of Dune being more or less just another Poke Smut Villain I've grown bored with this fic it's lost intrigue or interest and the constant stints of Smut tha lack of progress the destruction of Helen's personailty sicne the start Gardeviors hoity toity obnoxiousness etc... its honestly getting boring ever since the star of the fall of TR each chapter has just been even worse in quality goodluck and hope you do well but nah the fic has grown to be more obnoxious to read than interesting it's like you've given up on being interesting or consistent angain goodluck but this fic just ain't worth the read anymore imo

Honestly this personailty is meh at best atm way too hung up on Justice starting to sound like a retelling of the "For the Greater Good" kind of statements feels way too off putting for Piccolo even as a reincarnation MC

Daima retconned that...