Smut is decent but it's going to be sex friends at best with the MC's partners sleeping with other men or women as they please outside of a couple at most if you don't mind MC's who keeps wh*res and cheaters as partners around that f*ck other men then this fic might be decent for you but personally not interested

I'm with Alakazam here

I mean Magma and Aqua are still Continental at lowest and potentially Planetary level threats since ya know controlling Primordial Legendary's that literally shaped the planet is their end goal lore accurate Groudon Kyogre and Rayquaza are areguably only weaker than Giratina Arceus Dialga and Palkia and maybe Zygarde in hierarchy their Primal forms are technically according to lore Planetary lore accurate Pokemon is a world of difference with the anime and games

I don't blame them the addiction to Gwent of all things is just... man I don't know this fic showed promise starting out but now between the dialogue being stiff and needlessly exaggerated it's just ya know feels awkward and rough to read

Is it just me or is the dialogue stiff and just over exaggerated constantly it's getting kinda obnoxious

Yeah think I'm gonna drop the fic here been holding out waiting for us to return to the original MC of the fic instead we're still following a side arc for the past few months I'm good not interested in how things are panning out never understood why people write like this I'm here for the MC and their journey not side character #573 or Clone Trooper #91127 or something and their life story

Honestly this was a good fic up until the whole Savage Arc his character was just so cringy and forced it just wasn't enjoyable to read and now the whole Ciri and Damien Pedo ordeal with Ciri being between 19-21 at the moment and Damien barely 12~ish since she's just before the events of Witcher 3 being major downsides to the story I mean come in bro really out of everything you could've written Ciri and Child is what you settled for nah Imm good not gonna support or read anymore from that point forward the fics been good but I'm gonna stop reading it here those 2 events kinda ruined the fic IMO just took things past a point I'm comfortable with and kept going downhill in quality I get that your burnt out but yeah the direction you've been writing recently has left me with more questions and assumptions than the willingess to read your content

Up for either just want more lol

Being eye level with the holy grail while standing is the dream death by Amazon snu snu is def worth

Well as long as the characters personalities are differing enough had a few fics that made it extremely confusing because they hardly if ever made it apparent who was speaking and when someone else was so depends on the author

I would think he would consider the benifits of Thuum enhanced Necromancy would help him after all the Thuum is divine by nature a complete concept made manifest given physical form with sheer will and magic he is a logical thinker putting something on haitus to further it's potential reward with a sidequest seems like something a Lich like Phineas would consider worth it after all he's got near endless time to research and study what's a few years to a Lich who will live thousands as long as no one of superior power take's exception to his existence he's got plenty of time to perfect the creation of his living vessel

Hope your doing well welcome back

My brain has defaulted to a British accent with an Australlian influence with Reyvin and I wish I could share the voice I read in my head makes my ribs hurt at times with the accent

Yeah but the Thuum can be learned with enough patience and guidance I doubt Phineas wouldn't have the talent to learn it sure it would take time but still

I'm glad despite it seeming like he's a Evil varient of Ancient Saiyan at times and the whole sinister auta thing he still has some good in him makes the MC likeable and the story feel good to read thanks for the awesome fic so far looming forward to more

Eh while there are cons very few would even be able to act in the info like "ooh I had a family in another universe and I died and ended up here" yeah not many can even begin to act in that info let alone it actually be a useful tool to harm the MC a very simple and often used way to stop it is the System has built in safeguards to prevent it's existence from being found out without the host express permission like super simple super easy fix to get rid of the need to lie and not honestly trust those around you

Hmm... can has more?

Yeah guess this was perma dropped which sucks.. easily ine of the best HP fics around no golden trio no rehashed story with an extra character or 2 just something niche and unique RIP

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