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2023-11-13 04:07

Meh.๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’

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PcaNovelsAuthor

Wow, this review feels unjustified. I get that my book might not be the best you ever read but seriously?๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿค”๐ŸงYou didn't even explain why. Oh well, who am I to judge.

_DEKIM_Lv1

I didn't like it for several reasons, for example. he is just a creation of the real protagonist. It is also because a system is just a slave collar. The protagonist's power is not his, it belongs to the system, it is in the system. If the system disappears, the protagonist becomes a normal person. It's also because he has no backstory. He's just a tool.

PcaNovelsAuthor

That is literally completely wrong๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜. Did you even finish the first chapter? There isn't even a system novel. Plus the MC isn't a creation but literally is the same person, or being. Nevermind, who cares. Whether you like it or not is none of my business. I just wanted to know if I had any shortcomings so I could make up for them. There are many others who like it and add it to their library every passing day, but Thanks for the review. Read something else you like.

_DEKIM_:I didn't like it for several reasons, for example. he is just a creation of the real protagonist. It is also because a system is just a slave collar. The protagonist's power is not his, it belongs to the system, it is in the system. If the system disappears, the protagonist becomes a normal person. It's also because he has no backstory. He's just a tool.
_DEKIM_Lv1

Ok๐Ÿ‘

Lord_QuimeraLv13

Look at the guy's profile, he says all ff are bad.

PcaNovels:That is literally completely wrong๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜. Did you even finish the first chapter? There isn't even a system novel. Plus the MC isn't a creation but literally is the same person, or being. Nevermind, who cares. Whether you like it or not is none of my business. I just wanted to know if I had any shortcomings so I could make up for them. There are many others who like it and add it to their library every passing day, but Thanks for the review. Read something else you like.
PcaNovelsAuthor

I know. It was literally the first thing I checked.

Lord_Quimera:Look at the guy's profile, he says all ff are bad.
Lord_QuimeraLv13

Whenever I see comments like this I look at the profile of the person who commented to make sure it's not a bot or haters.

PcaNovels:I know. It was literally the first thing I checked.
PcaNovelsAuthor

Doesn't matter. At least apart from him/her, everyone else says it's ok. That's all that matters

Lord_Quimera:Whenever I see comments like this I look at the profile of the person who commented to make sure it's not a bot or haters.
JuhikoLv6

Uh huh, the bots are the ones that give 5 stars and a bunch of emojis.

Lord_Quimera:Whenever I see comments like this I look at the profile of the person who commented to make sure it's not a bot or haters.
DragonkingKyoLv6

who is love interest?(I hope for Raven as despite people saying she is over used from what I have seen she is rarely used)

PcaNovels:Doesn't matter. At least apart from him/her, everyone else says it's ok. That's all that matters
PcaNovelsAuthor

Haven't decided yet. But we will see.

DragonkingKyo:who is love interest?(I hope for Raven as despite people saying she is over used from what I have seen she is rarely used)
Leon_Luis_Lv4

Harem or No Harem?

PcaNovels:Haven't decided yet. But we will see.
christian_the_pogiLv4

your profile feels like gay๐Ÿ‘จโ€โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿค”

_DEKIM_:I didn't like it for several reasons, for example. he is just a creation of the real protagonist. It is also because a system is just a slave collar. The protagonist's power is not his, it belongs to the system, it is in the system. If the system disappears, the protagonist becomes a normal person. It's also because he has no backstory. He's just a tool.
PcaNovelsAuthor

Probably not.

Leon_Luis_:Harem or No Harem?
_DEKIM_Lv1

a kpop saying that my profile looks gay.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

christian_the_pogi:your profile feels like gay๐Ÿ‘จโ€โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿค”
Jerry070Lv12

What did they do to the rainbows, now a person can't even look at them before thinking its something gay.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

_DEKIM_:a kpop saying that my profile looks gay.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Leon_Luis_Lv4

probably so there is a 5(percent) chance you could add one

PcaNovels:Probably not.
THIZZGATORLv4

so your first instinct is to snoop aka stalk someone online?? Maybe you should unplug for a bit and have some normal interactions if that's the first thing you do. Some serious social media brain.

Lord_Quimera:Whenever I see comments like this I look at the profile of the person who commented to make sure it's not a bot or haters.
FrikandelSpeciaalLv4

I donโ€™t think that is the issue here, itโ€™s just a quick check to know if it is maybe a valid review or just hate for nothing,

THIZZGATOR:so your first instinct is to snoop aka stalk someone online?? Maybe you should unplug for a bit and have some normal interactions if that's the first thing you do. Some serious social media brain.
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Is this single fl or harem author?

PcaNovels:Probably not.
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