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2024-09-22 10:53

Ok so let's do this. First of all, I want to say that this novel is really good. The quality the updates and everything was good. I said WAS. The story was going on a very GOOD direction the characters, and everything was good but but the author decided to f this up. The personality of the mc changed. He became passive he let people walk over him even though he can kill them and become the strongest being within seconds, but he doesn't do it. Many stupid people were saying he can't become the strongest and other bullshit things, but I will just tell you this that as long as he has enough energy then he can do anything ok ANYTHING. So, I don't get how people still run away from him when I will tell you, but he could treat the Real Darkseid like he was toy with only 30 thousand energy units but the author gives stupid reason of him for not taking over the Godsphere and the plots becomes repetitive no scratch that there was no plot after him beating the Darkseid it became ur XINXIA TYPE BULLSHIT where he lets enemy run then enemy comes back finds that he can't even damage him then proceeds to run away and repeat this process indefinitely. All was lost for this book, but I guess the author decided to return the previous personality since the previous one was good OR MAYBE BECAUSE PEOPLE WERE LEAVING, I THINK HE GOT THE MESSAGE, so I suppose those won't be happening again and if u just don't read the part of him becoming too passive then I think its all good

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SaintSin
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Yep, right there with you. I just stopped reading, couldn't stand the stupidity and didn't care for it anymore

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I've read up to chapter 70, the protagonist is in maybe 1/3 of the chapters and that's being generous. The author continuously promises in the comments that "Oh I'll make the MC more active, oh I'll put the MC in more chapters, oh I'll stop making 3/4 of the novel from the POV everybody but the Mc" and yet fails to deliver time and time again giving out moronic excuses like "I just got so caught up in the world building (there is none) guys pwease forgive meπŸ₯Ή. This entire novel can be summarized by these few things. (β€’) Protagonist who's hardly in the novel and when he is he's pretty much a side character who does nothing but spout pseudo-intellectual gibberish every once in a while. (The overwhelming majority of text is from the POV of others.) (β€’) The novel, especially during the 20-50 chapter mark is riddled with Chinese-esque writing where you can find Chinese proverbs, metaphors and similarly Chinese plotlines; when I tell you this protagonist is the most passive incompetent Wuxia/Xianxia rip off MC I've ever seen I mean it. Every action from the MC mimics that of a Chinese young master from constantly making claims he doesn't back up to letting enemies go 24/7 to further the plot that never goes anywhere I mean the only character of relative importance that he's killed so far was (SPOILER ALERT) The Joker, every other character death (there aren't that many) were grunts and OC's. (β€’) The Author. As I mentioned before the author makes countless false promises claiming they'll improve their quality of work only for said promises to remain unfulfilled or for things to be made even worse. Often times you'll find comments criticizing or even asking the author simple questions regarding the novel to which the author will either respond with things such as "maybe" or "we'll see" like a corny teenager who think they're being mysterious; sometimes even liking comments but not responding to genuine questions from readers. ----------------------------------------------------------- Oh also! MC's first use of his power is to make a T-shirt, pants and give himself the mangekyou sharingan. Do with that what you will.

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