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Flaminfiend
FlaminfiendLv411mth
2024-03-24 03:43

The story has been alright so far, but it feels like every time we get a chapter with the MC we get 5 more without him. Sometimes it feels like he just stops existing. The author also hasn't really given me a reason to care about the MC as he is really apathetic. Feels like if nothing caught his interest then he would just spend years staring at a blank wall while gathering energy.

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Flaminfiend
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Also despite the romance tag he has not shown any interest in any of the female characters that have appeared at all like I said he's completely apathetic I would not be surprised if he is asexual. Feels like every female character could strip naked in front of him and start dancing and he would just stare at them blandly without an speck of emotion.

Shaka_De_Virgo
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So there is no harem?

Flaminfiend:Also despite the romance tag he has not shown any interest in any of the female characters that have appeared at all like I said he's completely apathetic I would not be surprised if he is asexual. Feels like every female character could strip naked in front of him and start dancing and he would just stare at them blandly without an speck of emotion.
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